Love is love until it's gone

Love is love until it's gone

A Poem by Wolfe

watching you, watching me, watching us on this black screen tv

feelin' like we don't ever talk the talk like we used to

I know you know what I mean, cause I see it in your eyes

and you’re the pupil in mine

I’m praying to a god, I don’t even know of, but I need some advice

Maybe it’s time for me to just grow up

and make my way back to reality

are we going to fade out into nothingness guess

it's kind of pointless even asking this cause I already know

This poem I wrote when we were still poor (pronounced poo)

When people knock on the door (pronounced doo), now it’s time to go

I see you weep and I know I keep saying these things

of making money and a family so you can be happy

So you don’t have to work anotha day in your life

I would take care of you and all nine, make you my wife

but life gotta different plan, feeling like Stan

it's sham to even walk around with the title of a man

like a psycho for those that don’t know 

I just keep going with “the plan” and

just keep holding your hand but 

the transparency just keeps attaching to you

like we're two magnets on blue 

and I can’t keep up, I'm sorry for all

But damn I still love you, and I just want you to know that

© 2017 Wolfe

Author's Note

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This piece is pretty interesting. I like how you give accents to the words in the poem. Like door and poor.

I see you've done mostly poems. I admire your work. Keep writing. (or typing ^w^)

Posted 2 Months Ago

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Good read
Good tone
Good rhyme

Posted 2 Months Ago

dang this poem is so good

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Added on August 15, 2017
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