Fireside Winter

Fireside Winter

A Poem by Einstein Noodle
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first posted on MySpace 10/01/2008 reworked a little today :)

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Fireside Winter


She held me
in warm hands
the same way

French toast
holds butter

Leaves outside
trembled and

Maple ran
to ground
in October

in South Dakota

E.


© 2015 Einstein Noodle



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I really love this poem
Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

thanks Lizardo! nice to meet you! i appreciate the visit and am glad you enjoyed it
E.
Lizardo

2 Years Ago

You're welcome!
Such a double entendre you've created here. I would imagine it's toasty by that fire while the wild winds blow outside.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

hi Icey! .. always a treat to see your smile!! thank you for stopping by and for your encouraging co.. read more
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B.J
Never get that cold here but we do have french toast and it is yummy

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

you are fortunate .. most people here always want to find a warmer clime but if ever they do .. its .. read more
B.J

2 Years Ago

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yummy simile! never thought I would want to eat a simile before :):) Well done my friend!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

you have put a simile smile across my face .. thank you Skittles from the moon! ... its been pretty .. read more
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2 Years Ago

Hahaha.. I loved the wonderful wiki-good-ia that you shared with me. You also bring smiles on my fac.. read more
aw that was very sweet, and those are the pictures that new years eve can make in someones mind, that was very beautiful work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

thank you always Stars .. for you taking time to read and comment .. much appreciated!
E.
stars are far

2 Years Ago

it is always my pleasure. :)
E, I love this! This is absolutley deliciously wonderful! I love the imagery and the reference to french toast and Maple syrup. You naughty boy...it dripped to the floor! He-he-he-!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

ahaha! thanks fro taking time Bright One! yes .. maple syrup and butter melting spread easily ... an.. read more
Bright Ocean Star

2 Years Ago

you are welcome... Have a great day.
Sounds like it was a good day

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

you are right Tate! a fine morning indeed .. and the memories are enhances the farther back they go .. read more
Synche ! Today I was hungry for french toast, but I'm diabetic and needed an excuse to make it.
I asked Gary : do you want french toast or Eggs and toast? He said eggs and toast.
I left the kitchen hungry. Now I read this and I am craving french toast.
Guess what we are having for supper?

Your right ! : french toast"

This is another one of my favorites of yours. Although I'm not sure what to make of Maple running it's sap in October. you'd have to have a winter freeze and a melt down.. cold nights and warmer days for the syrup to run and Does South Dakota have Maple trees?

I'm wondering if you saying. I was frozen stiff and wet myself too early , down south meaning your pants?

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

ahahahaha i took a lot of poetic license with time and place .. in order to express some close and s.. read more
Cryingkate

2 Years Ago

lmbo..... My intuition said I was over due to rattle your Arc...
They say:-" Never let a good .. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

:) ...........
Perfected imagery and delightful flow that feeds the reader, well done, good read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

thanks Thomas! i appreciate your taking time to read and comment .. glad you liked it :))
E.
Oh my....
she held me
in warm hands
the same way
french toast
holds butter
I think I just melted....

Stunning, stunning poetry my friend!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

2 Years Ago

Oh my back at you MsJewel .. Queen of romance and seductive sensuousness :) i could not be more grat.. read more

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