I CAN'T...

I CAN'T...

A Poem by horizon

I want to give you the whole of ME
 Thinking how much I LOVE you makes me cry 
Because it's LIMITLESS
 You flow in my VEINS,you are my thoughts
 My eyes are always in search of YOU
 Your eyes are so sad in grief and in repentance
 Because you can't love me the you want You want to LOVE me,POSSESS every inch of me
 I want that too My soul has ABSORBED you and your love
 Now there's no space to keep anything
 If anyone would try to squeeze you out of me
 Then drop by drop I'll die
 I am alive until you are within me
 That is FOREVER I love you so much that I can't leave you
 But for the sake of you,if the time comes
 I'll sacrifice LOVE Il sacrifice my SOUL I'll sacrifice YOU 
That day will be the last day
 Because I CAN'T live without you....

© 2016 horizon



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lovers can understand, massive love you hold in you keep going.
what fight can't win can only be won by LOVE


Posted 4 Months Ago


horizon

4 Months Ago

thanks for ur supporting words my frnd..good to hear it from u after a long time..thank u
Akash Sharma

4 Months Ago

friends and thank u can't be together, n what i said is the thing u deserve.....
love is lik.. read more
horizon

4 Months Ago

I do agree with u but thank u was for giving time..And yeah if we want some we've to fight for it
a beautifully written celebration of love, the loved one with you moment by moment into infinity, excellent work

Posted 4 Months Ago


wowwiee....wonderfully written horizon!

Posted 6 Months Ago


The ultimate high.
I count myself very very lucky to have experienced that feeling - crying with so much love for someone. It is a vulnerability that never leaves us. It makes us a better person, in time.
So many beautiful sentiments expressed eloquently as only a true romantic heart can.

Posted 9 Months Ago


A beautiful, yet bittersweet thought, of how much someone (the one) can mean to you, more than life itself. If Romeo and Juliet were a poem, this would be it.

Posted 10 Months Ago


horizon

10 Months Ago

really....you've made my day by your words...wonderful thank you
Lorry.

10 Months Ago

You're welcome :)
Oh, Dear Little Poetess,
This may very well be the most deeply beautiful and openly honest love poem I've ever read, and I've read literally thousands … even written many, too.
You've quickened my heart with wishing someone like you would love me this completely.
What's more to say of something I adore so fully, except to say, "I love it!"

Smiles 'n hugs of warmest thanks to you for sharing! ~ Richard : )

Posted 10 Months Ago


horizon

10 Months Ago

this comment of yours means a looott to me...you are an experienced writer and getting this comment .. read more
Richard

10 Months Ago

It is my bright joy! : D
Nice work done. Love to see more of your such works

Posted 10 Months Ago


horizon

10 Months Ago

It would be my pleasure....thanks for stopping by and reading my writes
Beautifully said. Full of emotion and feeling. Enjoyed the read. :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


Love is limitless, I like that line. Nicely crafted and well written. Your emotions pour out in your verse. Good work.
I will add one more thing, even if you have lost someone who meant the world to you, you should not let it keep you down or make you think the world has ended. Life goes on and even though you have lost, if you keep on living your love will remain.

Posted 11 Months Ago


horizon

11 Months Ago

thank you....and yes i am always living my life...
You had used a certain word during this heartfelt plea of love that I have been focused upon for a few weeks now. The word 'limitless'... Brilliant in placing this particular word in capital lettering, dear horizon. In my humble and irrelevant opinion, I have always believed that love should be limitless, given so freely that forgiveness and understanding can at times come easily for both parties. A relationship shouldn't come wrapped in a box, surrounded by walls that cannot be broken through as all the love turns out being is something pretty decorated in a bow and nothing anymore substantial than simply eye-catching. While reading this declaration on unending affection not a single chain, stonewall, shield, protective defense was put into play... This little write purely a stunning outcry of beautiful commitment and life-long adoration. I read this and saw eternity, saw a love as open as the sky. Just lovely, horizon.

Posted 11 Months Ago


horizon

11 Months Ago

thank you....you'll make me cry now...tears of happiness:""")
Beautiful Intentions

11 Months Ago

Aww! May they always be tears of happiness.:)
horizon

11 Months Ago

i hope it too...:):):)

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Added on November 13, 2016
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