taylor saved me

taylor saved me

A Poem by i am LiLy
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poem because.

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© 2017 i am LiLy



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I have mixed feelings about this. On the one hand, it's deep, there are a number of juicy lines ('when I'm asleep, I'm dead', 'this story ends but has no end'). But on the other, the meaning is not entirely presented and the musicality could use some tweaking. I'm not sure where you stand with such critiques, but I'm just stating my honest opinion in a friendly fashion. This is good work for a start. It could be improve, though, just as much as the next poet's.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emipoemi

1 Month Ago

Hey, we're all troubled. I know exactly what you're going through.

Musicality, to an.. read more
i am LiLy

1 Month Ago

thank you my friend...your words and encouragement mean a lot to me.....I'm so happy you read my wor.. read more
emipoemi

1 Month Ago

Just doing my part ;)



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I have mixed feelings about this. On the one hand, it's deep, there are a number of juicy lines ('when I'm asleep, I'm dead', 'this story ends but has no end'). But on the other, the meaning is not entirely presented and the musicality could use some tweaking. I'm not sure where you stand with such critiques, but I'm just stating my honest opinion in a friendly fashion. This is good work for a start. It could be improve, though, just as much as the next poet's.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emipoemi

1 Month Ago

Hey, we're all troubled. I know exactly what you're going through.

Musicality, to an.. read more
i am LiLy

1 Month Ago

thank you my friend...your words and encouragement mean a lot to me.....I'm so happy you read my wor.. read more
emipoemi

1 Month Ago

Just doing my part ;)

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i am LiLy
i am LiLy

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i'm lost but try to create and express my existence somehow. i feel broken and numb but I write because it stops my life ending. i record sounds and audio that i feel like is somehow between sound .. more..

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