bleeding out from within_my mascara runs

bleeding out from within_my mascara runs

A Poem by i am LiLy
"

the hell im....in i live within its joy

"

© 2017 i am LiLy



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what can i say ..so very poignant ...you go from constricted short lines .. a certain moment packed with emotion .. to an expansive sense of a life throughout time ..clever use of the past .. i like it! and then i am brought back home to reality ..perhaps in front of a mirror fixing mascara ... facing the day ...the story telling in this is what appeals the most to me ..as well as the form it has taken ..nice one Lily
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Months Ago

thank you....it's just my words falling onto paper when im in hell.

you are so kind t.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

i like your poetry ...its quite valid and important says i! ;)



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the title was excellent and the rest did not disappoint, nice writing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Months Ago

thank you for your kind words
what can i say ..so very poignant ...you go from constricted short lines .. a certain moment packed with emotion .. to an expansive sense of a life throughout time ..clever use of the past .. i like it! and then i am brought back home to reality ..perhaps in front of a mirror fixing mascara ... facing the day ...the story telling in this is what appeals the most to me ..as well as the form it has taken ..nice one Lily
E.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Months Ago

thank you....it's just my words falling onto paper when im in hell.

you are so kind t.. read more
Einstein Noodle

3 Months Ago

i like your poetry ...its quite valid and important says i! ;)
Honest, strong and good words and thoughts shared. Your brought the reader into your thoughts and you held them. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Months Ago

thank you so much
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

You are welcome. I liked this one.
You certainly convey pain and despair, but also frustration. Despite an awareness of the future--and our universal belief the future can bring change, happiness, and hope--you convey the future is inseparable from the past. Hence, don't waste your time trying to save you or anyone else. Hope is out of reach. Perhaps way off, but that's my takeaway.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

3 Months Ago

it pisses me off when life and the people in it make my mascara run........ that's all really......<.. read more
Robert Ray

3 Months Ago

Your spirit keeps me reading. Every poet entertains me. And, I'm glad I don't wear mascara. ;)

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Added on December 26, 2017
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i am LiLy
i am LiLy

United Kingdom



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i'm lost but try to create and express my existence somehow. i feel broken and numb but I write because it stops my life ending. i record sounds and audio that i feel like is somehow between sound .. more..

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