sometimes it hurts

sometimes it hurts

A Poem by i am LiLy
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my special cutting box ....is where i keep my blades....my bandages.....my tears and my past its my only safe place...and my comfort

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© 2018 i am LiLy



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cutting and the "cutter's" paradox is too little known and too little talked about ..bringing things to the light of others observations and opinions is medicine all our foibles need to take ... i applaud the gut honesty of this and all your writes Lily .. thank you for sharing your poetry
E.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

I feel strange taking comments like this when I'm not a writer or poet........

I can .. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

i think you hit on a very special vein of thought ..i think we all write to our pain ..at least for .. read more
i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

you are a very kind person......thank you for your lovely words.



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I liked how you twisted the words. Left the reader with something to think about. Thank you Lily for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

thank you for your amazingness and reading my words.
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
I think you should seek some type of help as I think it would help talking to someone

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

I'm fine my friend......

it's ok to be suicidal and depressed you know.....I accept w.. read more
cutting and the "cutter's" paradox is too little known and too little talked about ..bringing things to the light of others observations and opinions is medicine all our foibles need to take ... i applaud the gut honesty of this and all your writes Lily .. thank you for sharing your poetry
E.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

I feel strange taking comments like this when I'm not a writer or poet........

I can .. read more
Einstein Noodle

6 Months Ago

i think you hit on a very special vein of thought ..i think we all write to our pain ..at least for .. read more
i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

you are a very kind person......thank you for your lovely words.
Contrasting struggle of pain. This is a dark and bleak poem to read but it comes from your heart so at least you're honest with it

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

they are not poems or stories.....they are written snap shots of my daily life.

thank.. read more
The simplicity is exquisite... the pain obvious and the hope exists in this poem. Do any of us really know who we are or why we write/do what we do? I for one have no idea. You express the truth of a reality in a few short lines. Well done, yet again!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

I'm falling apart right now......

my words deep meaning to you is purely accidental.... read more
Karen Redburn

6 Months Ago

You're welcome. Check out the poem stay, you inspired it. (((hugs)))
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Pain streams through your poem, first to last line. The reader is left empty, but with a greater understanding, perhaps. The numbness is gone with each cut, pulling you back into life's realities, but then the pain intensifies, and you're reminded why you live in darkness. It's a vicious cycle, perpetual carousel, spinning in the dark, so fast everything is a blur. You can't stop it or seeing what's happening around you. So, this is what I get from your poem. Art in eight short lines.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

I honestly don't know why I am the way I am.....

I don't know why I do what I do...read more
"And when you tell the world,
The world would cry....."

Short but powerful, and the repetition spells perfection. Well done!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i am LiLy

6 Months Ago

thank you...huge thank you....

I feel so crap though....

you are telli.. read more

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Added on January 2, 2018
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i am LiLy
i am LiLy

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i'm lost but try to create and express my existence somehow. i feel broken and numb but I write because it stops my life ending. i record sounds and audio that i feel like is somehow between sound .. more..

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