SHALLOW BREATH

SHALLOW BREATH

A Poem by Jeff Bresee

Soft moonlit eyes that paralyze

Unbridled passion on the rise

The room afire to faded light

Fragrant desire fills up the night

As worlds disolve, so unaware

Entangled in your casual stare

Nowhere hide.  No way to see

No self control inside of me

Slow motions move through tangled time

In shallow breath I feel that I’m

Adrift upon your velvet sea

Your captive for eternity


…Jeff Bresee



© 2009 Jeff Bresee



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Nice poem Jeff. I very much like what you are doing and how you are doing it. I have comments to offer, which I shall do in a PM. You may of course, use them all or none, and I will not take offense.

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Added on December 29, 2009
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Jeff Bresee
Jeff Bresee

Dallas, TX



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I love to write poetry and then turn it into songs. I am a singer/songwriter for Weathered Pages, a Fort Worth, Texas based band. Check us out at www.weatheredpages.com And I hope you enjoy .. more..

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