dream i had on 4/19/12 ----- sharks attack

well just another dream i had wrote it into a short story

Dream i had on 4/19/12

　

Sharks Attack!!!

　

It was me , my mom , my boyfriend, my niece, and my dad. We all lived on the lake on this cabin. There was my brother Steven, and my nephew Traa. Actually this was not a lake it was an Ocean. My mom , and dad was leaving to go to church. I was dressing up real sexy in a very cute shirt , and skirt because i was real skinny. I got into the car and i forgot my purse. I said,” stop stop i need my purse.” They wouldn’t stop they just kept on going. After church we all went back to the cabin to have fun.

We went fishing. For some big fish. “But” All of a sudden a huge huge 40 foot shark comes then also there was another one, we was scared. Me and my niece Tonisha stayed there. All of a sudden something happened. We were both in the water. Oh NO! Help! Sharks are coming. Tonisha takes a really sharp stick and stabs it all the way to the bottom of the ocean. Me- Jen was drownding down to the bottom but Tonisha grabbed me up and pulled me to the top. She saved me. Everyone was happy. They were cheering. Then we left with our cars and that was the end of this dream.

　

The end,

　

BY:Jennifer Little

Reviews

[Starrleena Magyck]

Scary glad it turned out so well.

[Maria.F.T]

What a suspenseful dream !

[Starcaller]

Strange but most dreams are.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

I personally believe dreams express our deepest fears or desires, if we think them through carefully. Thank you for sharing the story.

[SlightlyOdd]

Thanks for sharing the grammar needs some work but mine usually does too and they say dreams have real life connections

[khalid]

it is scaring although it is really nice. i like it really. thank you for sharing

[SkrillexLover :)]

Awesome dream ;) Glad it wasnt classified as a "nightmare", because that would mean it scared the life out of you and that woulnt be good. Cool story :)

[Amanda]

very interesting dream. I am glad you made it in the end. great job :)

[Ashley Rivers :)]

I completely despise sharks. They're one of my biggest fears everytime I swim in the ocean. It's scary to dream about them. You're dream ended great, by surviving. Thanks for sharing such an unique dream... (nightmare) :)
Great job.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Renée J. Martin]

Scary dream glad you survived ...