Surrender

Surrender

A Poem by kaeridwyn
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So far away and yet so near

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Surrender

Lost inside a lonely tear, captured inside today
Arrows of derision are what I fear, coming from yesterday
Things are not what they appear, encapsulate in gray
So far away and yet so near, carry my soul away

Sweet bells I want to ring for me, beckon me to the sky
The sunshine please envelope me, images fill my mind
I’m blind so please help me to see, show me what I must find
Remove this haze of insanity, release these chains that bind

May the light please dry my tears, envelope me today
May the light please take away my fears, forget about yesterday
Things are not what they appear, your light negates the gray
Your love within is not too near, carry me home today

Elizam


© 2016 kaeridwyn



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"Things are not what they appear, your light negates the gray
Your love within is not too near, carry me home today"
This is a really good write-up! Gives one hope that all is not lost yet.. I liked reading this :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


a cry for rescue.......for help.....
away from the darkness..........
very well crafted......
i really liked it!!!!
:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kaeridwyn

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your beautiful words :)
Pushkar Prabhat

1 Year Ago

you are welcome............!!! :) :)
A fitting title after the core of it all. A gorgeous poem with very carefully chosen words to give a great effect....))))))

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kaeridwyn

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much :)
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

You are welcome .....:)))))))

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