Macabre

Macabre

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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The inner dark side of us. An autumn psychological write...He can refer to our psyche..

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Macabre/…….By Sami Khalil

A macabre write of the inner self…The dark side of us looking in the mirrors of insecurity...

The Poem:



He took the stages of pillared darkness, loathing in bizarre ways sought-after incarnadine backdrops, where madly arrayed moons withdrew, after the unrest of Sabbath gaps in fragile insecurities.


I saw his face, slicing through hunger and thirst, inspired by the tragic; the realm of shriek and grotesque, where certainty kissed the hands of death responsive to the interruption of life.


 Easily broken clouds addressed the self-doubt of insomnia, for my goodness, you could hear souls dancing in the burning of little births.


A shadow of gold he was, but to the court of others, a sharpened knife, seeking footsteps of breathless ashes where many ruins are deep in the essence of wisdom so much that temptations are the sighs in the margins.


Was death with him a happy scene, when I fancied the rhyming of standing ovations, simply caressing the veils at the funerals of regrets? 


Those willed to shadow sleep are the phenomenon!




© 2014 Sami Khalil



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He took the stages of pillared darkness, loathing in bizarre ways sought-after incarnadine backdrops, where madly arrayed moons withdrew, after the unrest of Sabbath gaps in fragile insecurities.

Our ego is only happy when everyone is enslaved. A very proofed write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. You have summed it up marvelously. A brilliant writer indeed. So glad you understood me and myw.. read more
Pryde Foltz

3 Years Ago

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Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

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Reviews

I just can't get enough of your work! This poem is the most deliciously dark thing I have read in quite a while and you summed up our inner dark side perfectly!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Valkyrie Warrior

2 Years Ago

Wow you say the nicest things!
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

:)..................
Valkyrie Warrior

2 Years Ago

:D......................................................................
Now THIS is my kind of poem! Love the darkness of this write, though as a more prosaic thinker and writer I feel like i'm missing some essential elements. Nonetheless, I felt the haunting effect.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this lovely review and kind words. Be blessed...:).....
We all take time to look at our faults... specially the ones filled with too much pride...nicely written Sami...my fav lines

Was death with him a happy scene, when I fancied the rhyming of standing ovations, simply caressing the veils at the funerals of regrets?


Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. So thankful to you beloved poet for all you say and do. Good to see you again...:)............... read more
self-doubt never sleeps, does it?

like a vampire it sucks the life's blood right out of us.

deep, dark write, sami.

jacob

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. So true and well articulated dear beloved poet. Thank you so might for gracing me with your lov.. read more
Wow Sammi! Wow

You've tapped straight into the other side of minds darkness here. Our insecurities test us and tap into the primitive parts of our brain and this is my friend a hard thing to understand. Nicely done my friend

Troy

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and kind words. You are appreciated..... read more
Yes, yes, yes. This one is so grimly perfect, Sam, my friend.
Roll tide, my friend... Roll tide.
And role out some more grueling goodies like this if you feel you should cause I feel you should.

-wesley

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this lovely review and kind words. Roll tide. You are apprec.. read more
I am reminded of Edgar Allan Poe. A very different style from you...a compelling write. Macabre, indeed.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. So thankful Diana for this wonderful visit and sharing. So glad you enjoy my macabre writes. Ha.. read more
such an interesting read!!

wonderful Sami

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this lovely review and kind words. You are appreciated...:)...... read more
You are a master of philosophy...you always touch deep..


Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Ayushi for this amazing review and kind words. You are appreciated...:)........ read more
This is so deep, like the chasms of minds. Your poetry just gets better every time I read it. You have approached this more unusual theme with your own image supported style, making the whole poem a unique experience.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. What a wonderful thing to say and appreciate dear poet. I'm thankful for all. Be blessed....:)... read more

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