Macabre

Macabre

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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The inner dark side of us. An autumn psychological write...He can refer to our psyche..

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Macabre/…….By Sami Khalil

A macabre write of the inner self…The dark side of us looking in the mirrors of insecurity...

The Poem:



He took the stages of pillared darkness, loathing in bizarre ways sought-after incarnadine backdrops, where madly arrayed moons withdrew, after the unrest of Sabbath gaps in fragile insecurities.


I saw his face, slicing through hunger and thirst, inspired by the tragic; the realm of shriek and grotesque, where certainty kissed the hands of death responsive to the interruption of life.


 Easily broken clouds addressed the self-doubt of insomnia, for my goodness, you could hear souls dancing in the burning of little births.


A shadow of gold he was, but to the court of others, a sharpened knife, seeking footsteps of breathless ashes where many ruins are deep in the essence of wisdom so much that temptations are the sighs in the margins.


Was death with him a happy scene, when I fancied the rhyming of standing ovations, simply caressing the veils at the funerals of regrets? 


Those willed to shadow sleep are the phenomenon!




© 2014 Sami Khalil



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He took the stages of pillared darkness, loathing in bizarre ways sought-after incarnadine backdrops, where madly arrayed moons withdrew, after the unrest of Sabbath gaps in fragile insecurities.

Our ego is only happy when everyone is enslaved. A very proofed write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. You have summed it up marvelously. A brilliant writer indeed. So glad you understood me and myw.. read more
Pryde Foltz

3 Years Ago

:)…………………………..
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

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Reviews

Very haunting! I needed a bowl of popcorn while reading this. Well crafted indeed!
You have so many good lines in this poem, too.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this wonderful review and appreciation. I'm honored by all.... read more
storiestotell

3 Years Ago

You're welcome, I look forward to reading your work.
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

:)......................
You might some back up before going in there.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Hahaha. I love your writes and review. Thank you soldier for the backup. Have a great one...:)........ read more
this was a perfect picture of our inner beings with all clouds and darkness it brings

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

I look forward to that. Please send some read requests if you do...:).................
 wordman

3 Years Ago

you got it
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

:).........................
Simply mind blowing and spine tingling write. Awesome job sir.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much talented poet for the excellent review and appreciation. I'm honored to call .. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

3 Years Ago

Was my pleasure sir.
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

:)................
I saw his face, slicing through hunger and thirst, inspired by the tragic

Sami Khalil

Posted 3 Years Ago


A macabre write of the inner self…The dark side of us looking in the mirrors of insecurity...

Enjoy!

Do your best to understand. You can share your own interpretation. No rules for that...

Posted 3 Years Ago



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