I Really Do

I Really Do

A Poem by wordman


 


  Dancing in the grass barefoot,

under a starlit night,

the moon gold and full,

giving us light.

 

I hold you close,

as we dance,

you feel so right,

a true romance .

 

We take a dip,

in the hot tub,

as i hold you close,

you pull me in tight.

 

You kiss my lips,

as i lite the fire pit,

and sit beside you,

in our swing.

 

You kiss me again,

as my hand cups your breast,

my other hand,

slightly under your dress.

 

You un hook my pants,

pull off my shirt,

you kiss my chest,

as i suck on your breast`s.

 

we lie down,

on a pallet,

beside the fire pit,

the moon shining down on us as we make love.

 

You say you love me,

and i say i love you too ,but baby,

i really do...  

 


© 2018 wordman



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such a lovely poem, your depiction of love was full of depth. i also appreciate the simplicity of it.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thank you for reading haley
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A poem reads like a song...a very sensual one. Enjoyed so much.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

so tell me happy birthday
.

1 Month Ago

:)))) Happy Birthday Ron!
 wordman

4 Weeks Ago

thank you divia
Apart from a couple of spelling errors, this is a well written declaration of love. Very sensual.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Mallika Relives

1 Month Ago

Third last line.
 wordman

1 Month Ago

got it,,thanks
Mallika Relives

1 Month Ago

You're welcome.
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Zoe
Reminds me of one of my favourite songs. Tenderly penned as ever!

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

me to...so tell me happy birthday
Zoe

1 Month Ago

Ohh, wish you a very happy birthday! Enjoy :)
 wordman

4 Weeks Ago

thank you zoe
Nice flow of words and thoughts shared my friend. You made the reader believe your words. Love should be sweet and tempting. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thanks john,see you in a few days,moving today
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Stirring emotions deep down that only two lovers can share but so special when the love shared by two is real and true. Lovely scene played out in words🌹

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
Thoughts In Time

2 Months Ago

Only a pleasure second time I read it lovely🌹
 wordman

2 Months Ago

more sexual than i usually write but this is how it came out,,thanks again
Jeez it's so sweet and romantic, like, ow, my heart . . .
"but baby,
i really do... "

You killed it. Hell, I don't even know what to say. Great flow leading to that ending which just worked so well. It was intimate, not taking itself too seriously, but completely genuine and real, and the feels. . .

100/100 with a bang
(pun definitely not intended)

Hailey


Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

oh hell i like pun,i usually don`t write so explicit,but i did on this one
"beside the fire pit,

the moon shining down on us as we make love.



You say you love me,"

Posted 2 Months Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

:)..............
 wordman

2 Months Ago

we are now steady
Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

Hahahaha....
ooh so romantic with passionate desire displayed..and moonlight sets the perfect tone for a lovely evening,, nice work here..

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you fran,i appreciate your visit
  Fran Marie

2 Months Ago

you're so welcome Ron
So important to be able to feel so deep, and so real🌹

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you for the visit,and i seem to write very deep,i seem to be stuck there with deep emotions
Thoughts In Time

2 Months Ago

Best place to be stuck otherwise there’s no life🌹
 wordman

2 Months Ago

yeah,i appreciate you

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