Who am I

Who am I

A Poem by Quietstorm
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Semi poem

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I am a patriot of Truth .
Seeking to inspire and motivate the youth.

© 2020 Quietstorm


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This is intriguing Q. The phrase patriot of truth is unusual. Something like 'believer in truth' would be more common. It makes me think - why use patriot. It's usually used in the context of support for your country. It the present time it might signify some division in the country where a group are thought to be non-patriotic. I think that the unexpected like this in writing is great. The next thing is the word Truth. What exactly is truth and are there different truths? It makes me think of the phrase 'fake news'. Do we each have our own truth? Your second line is very idealistic but it all depends on the motivation - in past times it has led to vile organisations like the Hitler youth.
Well done for this though provoking semi poem. (what about the other half!)
Take care,
Alan

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quietstorm

1 Year Ago

Thanks. for your review, and I've actually added more to this piece, just didn't post it.



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This is intriguing Q. The phrase patriot of truth is unusual. Something like 'believer in truth' would be more common. It makes me think - why use patriot. It's usually used in the context of support for your country. It the present time it might signify some division in the country where a group are thought to be non-patriotic. I think that the unexpected like this in writing is great. The next thing is the word Truth. What exactly is truth and are there different truths? It makes me think of the phrase 'fake news'. Do we each have our own truth? Your second line is very idealistic but it all depends on the motivation - in past times it has led to vile organisations like the Hitler youth.
Well done for this though provoking semi poem. (what about the other half!)
Take care,
Alan

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quietstorm

1 Year Ago

Thanks. for your review, and I've actually added more to this piece, just didn't post it.

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Quietstorm
Quietstorm

Dallas, TX



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I'm an aspiring poet, looking to spread light to those who may be in a dark place. I've been writing poetry for 15 years, but it has been more of a hobby, even though its a passion of mines. I recentl.. more..

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