The Virtuous Cycles

The Virtuous Cycles

A Poem by Casey Truax

The towers touch the tethered sun
And darkness draws on silent wing;
The doge of day bestows his ring
To shadowed seas and dusk is done.

From star to star the axis shifts
Above the glades where glaciers claw
And winter weeps in season's thaw
As summer brings its borrowed gifts.

The dawn is dashed as water warms
And vapors vault in valleyed storms;
The rain that rounds the rugged crest
Will seek the sea from east or west

And reaping riches from the foam
The crab will craft his hardened home
And slide like snow to ocean's deep
Where mantle holds its hidden keep

'Til flame and fury's mountains blow
And blaze the night with fulgent flow
And billows block the sun in gray
Or dazzle with the dawn of day.

The fractured face of Earth holds tight
On wine dark waves that warm the drift
And bergs of ice that break and rift
The balance of the black and bright.

At noon or night the bold bells peal
For brides who break the covered glass
And martyrs mourned on meager grass
Are spokes upon a single wheel.

© 2023 Casey Truax


Author's Note

Casey Truax
A virtuous cycle, or negative feedback loop, is a system that creates equilibrium, in contrast to a vicious cycle. "From star to star the axis shifts" refers to the precession of the equinoxes. Stanzas 3-5 are my attempt at a poetic description of the carbon cycle, a "virtuous cycle" that stabilizes Earth's climate. Stanza 6 refers to the albedo effect.

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Reads like a classic. Beautiful poetry, Casey.

Posted 2 Months Ago


You are right Casey. Life is a loop. Very hard to get off.
"At noon or night the bold bells peal
For brides who break the covered glass
And martyrs mourned on meager grass
Are spokes upon a single wheel."
The above lines. I liked. Powerful and worthwhile poetry shared.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


Casey Truax

3 Months Ago

I wasn't sure how many of my readers would know that breaking a covered glass is a Jewish wedding tr.. read more
Rather an interesting read, especially the rhythm and rhyme scheme. Oh, and the subject, too, of course! Yes, lovely piece of poetry to absorb, and the albedo can dazzle. Thanks for a superb poem, Casey.

Posted 4 Months Ago



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Added on December 12, 2023
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Tags: rhyme, earth, nature, science, climate, environment


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