Peeking

Peeking

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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peaking

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With Autumn coming our way

Blackberries are taking some peeks

They are looking to all ripen up

Say, in a couple-a-weeks

 

Tho’, Mother Nature sent a memo

Mentioning something bout taste

Suggesting to not ripen too quickly

And overlook taste in their haste

 

Sunlight was brought into the equation

And water, oh yes water for sure

Because without these able assets

Their taste won’t be as fresh and pure

 

Swarming over prickly branches

Till with attention they are terminally showered

Because little do these little yummy things know

They will soon be completely devoured

 

 

 

 

 

 



© 2020 Dave Brown


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Don'tcha just love them purple oozing fruits? They grow wild here and are well on the way, but not ripe enough yet for plucking. Great in an apple pie. Yum yum Dave.

Chris

Posted 8 Months Ago


Christine Anne Shaw

8 Months Ago

With custard, cream or ice-cream. Take your pick :))
Dave Brown

8 Months Ago

I'll take it all .
Christine Anne Shaw

8 Months Ago

Not all at once I hope :)) That would be a teeny weeny bit greedy :)
I wouldn't want to be a plump berry for sure!
Enjoyed very much.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Dave Brown

8 Months Ago

If so, best to hide way behind the prickle bushes
Good eve Pestonjee
AJNJ

8 Months Ago

GoodMorning! I hope all is well with you. :)
Sweet berries and sweet poetry.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Dave Brown

8 Months Ago

and a sweet comment
Thankyou AP

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