Rude Mouse

Rude Mouse

A Chapter by Dave Brown



The rude mouse that resides under our home

Who is inclined to nocturnally roam

And never says please

While swiping our cheese

Has now been snapped up by last bite syndrome

© 2020 Dave Brown

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Rodents deserve to be snapped up. That's another thing I have no sentimentality for. Animal lover tho I may be, my cabin is not up on stilts so that the entire freakin rodent population of the wilderness can get out of the rain, under there. All the skittering & banging around makes my dogs bark many times thru-out the night, which causes my legendary insomnia to kick in. See how much trauma your poem provokes? I better smoke a bowl (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago

Dave Brown

3 Months Ago

sympathies from me B G
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Oh. I felt a big ouch at the end of this.

Posted 8 Months Ago

Dave Brown

8 Months Ago

I ash humble forgiveness, or do I ask??
Ana Papaya

8 Months Ago

Probably me
Dave Brown

8 Months Ago

K man

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