It Isn't You

It Isn't You

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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As morn’s Sun sends its golden love

When that fiery orb comes into view

Though its wonder heats all heavens above

It isn’t you

 

Sweet nectar sipped by the hummingbird

While a million wingbeats dry morn’s dew

Though each flower’s magic is stirred

It isn’t you

 

When a soft cloud blushes at beauties sight

Neath the bright heaven’s far-reaching purview

Though its magic display’s gentle’s light

It isn’t you

 

When a million star’s light night’s sky

Giving the Milky Way a rose petal’s hue

And though it also sang a soft lullaby

It isn’t you

 

That Spring’s brightest technicolor

Flamboyantly bursts into view

Though, like the gentle caress of a lover

It isn’t you 


A chest filled with jewel’s sparkling bright

With endless sapphires cast askew

Though it be worth the full moon’s light

It isn’t you

 

I have only a Poet’s voice to offer

A love that is true

Coming from emotion’s deepest coffer

And I mean it only for you

 



© 2021 Dave Brown


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So much beauty is around but that is lifeless if those don't rub with ourselves.. But a true loving voice is worth a million dollar... So so true! We don't need a skyful of aura but a sweet nest that we can call our home... A beautiful endearing write..

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

Certainly nothing like snuggling up in front of a warm fire with your precious p***y-cat snuggled in.. read more
Well you just knocked my socks off Dave with this romantic beauty. Perfickly lovely it is. Visual, descriptive and filled with loving. Yes, one of your best. Trust all is well. How is elusive spring doing?

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

Thankyou Chris
I can't keep track of you. Instead of ageing you seem to be getting consistent.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Months Ago

My granddaughter, a good photographer :) Maybe she caught me in a favourable light. Don't work so ha.. read more
I think this one is your best, Dave. Did not know you were such a romantic. Reminds me of some of the 17th Century English poets. Well done.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

I figured at my advanced age, I had better at least try getting romantic before it is too late
Wow, Dave! This was...insanely beautiful! I loved the rhyme and the way you described something so pulchritudinous, then simply went back on it like, "Yeah, that's a pretty view and all, but it's nothing compared to you"
GERSH! SUCH A FINE POEM YOU HAVE CREATED HERE, DAVE!!!!
Thank you so much for sharing :))))

Nix ❤️️

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

UR2funny and have sent my noodle off 2 Google
WOW, I loved this one! the rhyme and flow of this is fantastic and the abrupt change of tone at each stanza's ending is well... abrupt! but it makes a fine exclamation point but your voice in this is awesome

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

Just a-bit-a mush BB
Robert Trakofler

2 Months Ago

I am old school I like mush with my gravy

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