Kina Lazy

Kina Lazy

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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Through a quiet wood I pass

Regarded by tall towering trees

Entertained by squirrel chitter chatter

Tickled by touch of light breeze

 

Where soggy, saturated soil subsides

As raucous rain and snow abate

Deciduous buds shyly peek an eye

Readying for Spring’s pending mandate

 

Capricious, crooked creeks cajoling

From still snow-covered peaks

Burbling, bubbling, gurgling, guggling

A hurrying horde of winter’s leaks

 

Fall’s leaves camingled with fir needles

Knitting a quilt work of forest freeway

Evergreen galoots with long-legged roots  

Combine for a spring, nesting souffle

 

A tender twig cracks, then quiet

A silent Towhee shadow slips by            

Sun’s warm bright filter’s down

An early Owl sends a hooty “Hi!”

 

March madness is my kind of crazy

Barbecues midst daffodil and daisy

As winter memories get more hazy

I’m getting ‘Enjoyin Sun” kina lazy

 

 

 



© 2021 Dave Brown


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Why not get a little bit lazy? Give yourself a little break and enjoy the arrival of the new season. A feast here of alliteration and rhyme. I also enjoyed the walk Dave.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

have been watching 'Move to the Country' ? based in England and have been overwhelmed with all the b.. read more
This is a natural delight. This poem reassures that nature is always in vogue especially during spring. Loved it.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

that spring thing is a winner
Great poem Dave! Enjoyable use of poetic devices without seeming forced or unnatural, humor, beauty. Fun easy read. Timely as well - I just saw my first crocus here yesterday. Still waiting for the daffodils.
Cheers.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

Thanks John
Ain't it wonderful
Loved your spring poem
Hope your winter was bearable
We just finished a moderate summer not too hot just right like the cereal from Kellogg’s

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

just finishing up
seems to get a little warmer each year
Added to my grocery list for my next visit to Writer's Supply & Ink Barrel I have added a pound of alliteration and a yard of onomatopoeia. Your fine poem has made me realize I am slap out. Far too many good pups to designate a "pick of the litter" line, but "Evergreen galoots with long-legged roots" is in the top three.
Thanks much for writing this and sharing it with we lesser mortals.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

one of those mere mortals has sent me off to google to discover the meaning of onomathingamajijerwha.. read more

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