Re: St. Paddy

Re: St. Paddy

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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Guinness cupcakes

With Baileys Irish cream frosting

Would be the kind of taste

I couldn’t care what it was costing

 

My taste buds ae salivating

At the thought of the taste

Prompting me to consume

With a ‘lets do it’ type haste

 

But the expanding area

Held in check by my belt

Reminds me my current shape

Is far from being svelte

 

Which will win out

Common sense or desire

I’m pretty sure common sense

Won't put out this fire

 



© 2021 Dave Brown


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I would pick desire.
"Which will win out
Common sense or desire
I’m pretty sure common sense
Won't put out this fire"
I did like the above lines. I want a piece of blueberry pie with some ice cream on top. Thank you Dave for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

LOL that sweet tooth is tough to ignore
desire it is
I vote for "desire."------

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

Appears like a majority call
tooooo good to pass up
Bailey's Irish cream frosting on Guinness cupcakes. Sounds mighty tasty. Hope you don't have to do a breathalyzer test, though.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

👍 .
D****t Dave! Leaving on an ice cream run, thanks a lot!

Posted 2 Months Ago


John Cardwell

2 Months Ago

Sorry Dave. I can't hold you responsible for my lack of will power. (Those cupcakes sounded sooooo .. read more
Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

It was a recipe I saw on a gardening (?) site
This might reflect why more liquor is sold on S.. read more
John Cardwell

2 Months Ago

Ha! Interesting. Nice poem by the way.
LOL my covid waist expansion has been peeking lately:/

Posted 2 Months Ago



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