Love Potion

Love Potion

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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Love app potion number ten

Introduced after app number nine

Was redesigned to deliver love

In itsy-bitsy teeny-weeny time

 

The bomp in the bomp a bomp bomp 

Was redesigned for the heart

By adding lotsa rama lama ding dong

To give it a much quicker start

 

These app lications of boogie woogie

With added portions of bee bop

From either of these two potions

Have enhanced effects that never stop

 

Now there’s a new number eleven

Containing dip in the dip da dip da dip

But you’ll have to call Jim Dandy to the rescue

If you take more than just a small sip

 

 

 



© 2021 Dave Brown


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Those love potions can be dangerous. I liked how you made the words dance to the strong ending. Thank you Dave for sharing the amazing chapter.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


Hello Dave. Love apps eh, and lots off Em. All those bee bops, rama lama ding donhs. boogie woogies, itsy bitsies has got me feet stomping and I wanna dance. Now you Must tell me who Jim Dandy is. Good Friday afternoon. Cold and sunny here. Have a good weekend.

Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

Short Fat Fanny was Little Richard's very jealous girlfriend and at a party where LR had made the mi.. read more
Chris

2 Months Ago

Wow, what an explanation. Thank you. Short fat Fanny, what an unfortunate name:)
Like everyone else in the comment section, this stanza made me smile!
"The bomp in the bomp a bomp bomp
Was redesigned for the heart
By adding lotsa rama lama ding dong
To give it a much quicker start"
Don't forget the diddally wops and the plink plops! Those show up in almost all the dating sites these days! Lol, you gotta tiny giggle outta me with this poem, I loved how creative it was :) Thank you for sharing, Dave!!! :)

Kindly, Nix ❤️️

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

Thanks
I have been wondering how your wounded starling has been making out
A happy or .. read more
Nix is typing...

2 Months Ago

Well, we took it outside in the box, and it jumped to the top and jumped out into a bush...I guess i.. read more
Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

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I have not tried “love app 9, 10, nor 11. This made me smile. Gotta be careful of the Rama lama ding dong. And the boogie woogie that maybe lurking about.

This was a very creative light hearted poem that made my slightly laugh and definitely made me smile. Dating in the 2020s is definitely different that is for sure.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

I think they are all in short supply but be careful if you do luck out
Damn! I just baked a croissant so I could eat it fresh & hot from the oven, but still I wish I had had whatever you had for breakfast (that made you come up with THIS!) I love the "bomp" line which invites me to take my own made-up word bopping to new lengths. I often "bop" in my writing, but now it's time to "bomp" to the big time!!!! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

PS - the Jim Dandy line is also top shelf!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

That 'ram a dam a ding dong' song came up last night and I thought it deserved a poem ( or whatever .. read more

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