Lonely

Lonely

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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(❁´◡`❁)

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A lonely spider

Unappreciatid

Met a lonely fly

And she ateid



© 2021 Dave Brown


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Oh the poor fly that has met the spider

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

won't do it again!!!
I found this mysterious yet likable. I felt a message of ongoing loneliness on the spider's part, as if it were her destiny to be so from her ways of eating creatures. Thank you for writing, precious one 💖.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

apparently most prefer living alone,
quite likely cuts down on their divorce statistics
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Shidare

1 Month Ago

Oh wow 💙💖💜
I wonder if that spider knew that the fly had been stepping in just a few moments earlier.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

I am sure that she felt it was fateid
Wait a minute. I can't remember much, but I think I've read this poem before. Or maybe you've just written enuf spider poems to last thru 2021. I do enjoy your "id" ending which is a trademark known to only you & which carries some weird effect that works perfectly with your oddball writing persona (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

I just happened to notice this lying about this morning and thought I'd give it an airing
Th.. read more
barleygirl

1 Month Ago

When people review my older poems (posted more than a week ago), I often can't remember ever writing.. read more

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