All Shook Up

All Shook Up

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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Heartbreak hotel

Had a cancellation

Mack the knife

Withdrew his reservation

Because the wayward wind

Had become all shook up

And wouldn’t go

Through the green door

To walk in the rain

with Billy Elliot



© 2021 Dave Brown


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Dave Brown
these things happen

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"Mack the knife withdrew his reservation" . . . very clever! I almost felt a knife sliding out of my gut flesh. You do a superb job of dragging in a dozen different references to make the reader scratch his/her head . . . Billy Elliot led me to Google (you'll be satisfied to know, I'm sure) . . . but nothing at Googs illuminated for me the reason BE's in this poem!?!?! I think my synapses are breaking down while you're are being poetically built up! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

I really enjoyed the concept of dragging that big long filthy, super sharpened, bloodied reservation.. read more
Heartbreak hotel is never a good thing

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

even the janitor wants to get away from the place, its just that the money.....the..money
its.. read more
Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

Money is the root of all evil they say lol

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