The Devil You Say

The Devil You Say

A Chapter by Dave Brown
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Devil PNG
When I was to interview the Devil

He arrived in a lovely Rolls Royce 

Saying of all liquid refreshment

Blood was his very first choice

 

While the black night burned darkly

His eyes flashed a sickly bright green

I knew that after this interview concluded

I’d need many cups of caffeine

 

Black Ravens had accompanied him

Their brown eyes pierced the night

Tho’ lazily lounging on the finest of leather

They were poised to insight fearsome fright

 

His fangs reflected the Moon’s light

An evil grin spread cross his face

On his mind he had but one thought

Finding a victim to embrace

 

He explained to me the formalities

Of how to capture a clueless victim

He would unleash all his black Ravens

And with their gross beaks, they sticked em’

 

His blood tendency seemed a tad gross

Otherwise, he seemed a decent type fellow

But the thing that turned me right off

Terrible breath and teeth a ghastly yellow

 

I quickly concluded the interview

Turning away, I felt a near wreck

Then, overcome by his horrible breath  

As his yellow fangs sliced into my neck

 

I could feel him slurping my blood

Which, I really wished he wouldn’t do

But, slowly fading to black, I realized

This would be my last interview

 

 



© 2021 Dave Brown


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This is cute, couldn't help but to laugh.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

Hmmm!
It is supposed to scare you
Does this mean a failing grade
Lady K.

1 Month Ago

no it is spooky but also cute in a way it made me laugh as well
The ending brought a chuckle. Happy Halloween (a week early).

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

& 2 U 2
You can't say you weren't warned. Plenty of clues before you got close and comfortable.. I mean anyone who drinks to excess would worry me and this chap was mighty thirsty.as well as ugly. A lesson I think to your readers, that there are unsavouries out there.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


Chris Shaw

1 Month Ago

Full of cold and cough. Another restless night. Honey and lemon keeping me company :))
Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

Sorry to hear, hasn't hit here yet but I guess our turn will come
Bundle up
Chris Shaw

1 Month Ago

Covid still high, but mainly in the vaccinated ie Young under 16's. However, the common cold has com.. read more
I think Big D's announcement of his favorite drink should have been a warning sign. Those green eyes should have cinched. You Uber drivers are too eager for a fare.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

I'm not so sure you are taking all this seriously enough
This is a grand sustained effort in rhyme & rhythm! I felt myself growing more & more jealous, as your poem took its leisurely time, all with well-executed R&R -- distractingly so, you could say. You probably notice I hardly ever write a poem over 5 stanzas becuz that's when all my R&R ideas go bust. I have the utmost regard for your staying power. You must have some powerful horses under your hood (((HUGS)))

Posted 1 Month Ago


Dave Brown

1 Month Ago

It's all in the hay
BG

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