Note

Note

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

Note

 

Every drum has a sweet spot

Deep tone batter strike to resonant head

Pulsing a consonant echo

 

Every poem taps a rim shot

Steep words flowing life to sonorant thread

Brushing a consciousness marrow

 

Every sketch wraps a true thought

Reap lines melting light to resonance pled

Blushing in sumptuous wallow

 

Every heart raps to be taught

Weeps aches swelling plight to completion wed

Gushing for splendorous follow




© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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I enjoy the verbal richness here. So many weighty words that carry their weight. Makes me think of a long winding jazz improv. A song where you aren’t the same when you come out the other side of its story.

And of course, the quiet wisdom of the sentiment. The title says it all for me. The notes are often the most important source.

Great poetry

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

when i write lines i always put layers of connection and meanings that cross the stanzas. like when .. read more



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Note to self.. this is bang on, skip back more often & learn how its done. Just about perfect and in more ways than one...

Neville

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

thanks Nev my wave obsession has no end!
Neville

5 Months Ago

No kidding.. :)
very thoughtful rhyme scheme with a one two punch

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

Thanks for the read Lyn :)
i think dear Bunny it is the very soul you are describing .. the essence of the note :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

to quoth the Bunny "to notes we have no choice"...thank God!
Now, My Friend,
Here's a great way to start the weekend, with an excellently rendered poem even the most accomplished of writers will appreciate and enjoy for its unique syntax, metaphoric enchantment, rhythm, flow, and entertaining imagery.
The 8/10/8 meter and abc, abc, abc rhyme scheme reads in a staccato-like drum pattern … neat, definitely not effete, in ohhhh-so lively a beat … sweet!
Great symbolism, too, for the passion of learning and writing expressively meaningful, captivating poetry.

Love it … thanks, Robert, for the Saturday morning treat! ⁓ Richard 🍃

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

Thanks when i think of a staccato beat in motion it always conjures a forward backwards sort of move.. read more
Richard 🍃

5 Months Ago

True in drumming, or in a guitar calypso beat; but, in poetic rhythm, the motion can only move the e.. read more
Richard 🍃

5 Months Ago

As you have so skillfully done in this entertainingly unique poem.
For interest, add you some.. read more
And this one provides the perfect backbeat for a richly worded poem. Good rhythm...definitely hits the sweet spot...has a great tonality...underlying beat laid down perfectly.

A good write.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

I love how you hear me Mr Kniffen :)
Smooth and insightful-
A moment of reflection to see and hear the perfection of a thing and then possibly wonder what your own might be.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

I very much think that you breathe them on paper
Cherrie Palmer

5 Months Ago

Oh you had sugar in your tea this morning.
I really like the connections made here. The drum/percussion/heart/music/feelings. Its one of those poems that seems as if it has always been there; just needed someone to find it. Ore rather it took a jazz/poet/ musician to do so. Great riff.
A true favourite.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

Thanks for reading me Ken, and knowing me kindred soul
Wow dear Bunny, I feel this as both, joy and heartache, science and waves of energies, yet Your describe it with a poetical touch, I see no scientific word but it all speaks about the truth of energies, Your mind always has something interesting to speak, write and share with us, Thank You*

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

Thanks light I'm still stuck on the waves... (including the violet ones:)
I love the words you use, so rich and perfect at delivering meaning. Another thing I noticed is how satisfying the structure of the poem is to the eye. A very good read.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

Hey thanks @ nice to meet you I'm Bunny:)
@_av_poetry

5 Months Ago

I'm Angela. Looking forward to reading more of your work. I do love me a good poem.
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

well my ReaL name is Robert
mostly Rob
but never Bob
certainly never bobby .. read more
The forever artist and lover of all things heard and unheard! Splendid!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Months Ago

You see me so clearly my Queen... long will you reign!

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

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