Streams A Thought Flow

Streams A Thought Flow

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
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stream of thought flow thing

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__Streams A Thought Flow __

 

I touch the pool of your thought flow

Streaming along my conscious

Index finger glancing  

Drawing underline

Under yours

Sweet sentient

Sentences’ strokes

Tickling tender transport

Warmth wrapping my body exalt

Hearth to my heart melding my mind flow

Gleaned graces touching traces

Of the places in the paces

Tween those spaces

Of your lines

Witness

Gentle honor

Taste caresses my face

As I place damp finger to my lip

Running its boundry sampling its fine

Scent and sensation filling me A rapture flow



© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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' 'Tween those spaces - Of your lines - Witness - Gentle honor - Taste caresses my face - As I - '

Sometimes the best stream of blissful consciousness come from extraordinary places and faces. There's amazing warmth here but. eloquence leaves the reader's thoughts on just about the right side of ..

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

was hoping you would read this thought you might appreciate it. I don't usually just right stream. t.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

Smiling again



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Just the right grace, taste served on a golden plate. A pallet of sensual, romantic lines that affects moods and situations.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Sensual and complex. What a thrill ride. Thank you.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

Hey Tom nice to meet you:)... thanks so much!
Thanks for directing my attention to this sensual poem! I love it! I can't remember you doing much sensual poetry, but this one stands out as a favorite for me! This has just the right balance of expressing in whispers of imagery while also being tangled in straightforward. Great attention to sound patterns, but in a whimsical way (not structured). The way this is visually formatted, I'm catching the idea of melding "finger" & "stream" as being entwined, trailing wet smears of impressions along by dragging fingertips thru the stream of thought, then across a smooth dry boulder (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


... You are right...
We do share the same tastes...
This is utterly along the lines of what i consider...
Gorgeous

"Sentences’ strokes
Tickling tender transport
Warmth wrapping my body exalt"


I do not have words to use to describe it...
Because descriptions pale in comparison to the
way you lead with...
Then drop it with another...
Then poof back to immaculate editing, shapely, curvy....

The title...
Maybe add a "h" to "A" to make it
"Ah"

Streams Ah Thought Flow

But maybe do not...

Because people do not tend to like it...

But ME, perfectionist that I am...
Feels the flow in this deserves the "h"
Hah
I would even go as far as...

"Streams ah thoughts ah flow"
Why?
No idea...

I hate making titles...

But I LOVE adding syllable-sound when none should exist...
Why?
Idk...

Super satisfying...

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

I am confident in that feeling of congruacity in compositioning from calamitous craniums... me think.. read more
Silente-Write

2 Weeks Ago

EXACTLY..........
Silente-Write

2 Weeks Ago

But do not change THIS one, it was food for thought...
Always just the next, never go back t.. read more
dear Bunny... this reminds me of choosing a Hallmark card for a beloved
friend... underlining certain words... and adding little quote marks and a 'heart here and there.
Sealing the envelope with a moistened forefinger, as though the scent will be sealed
and still linger. I know I tend to place flowers on every stone that gathers lovely green moss.
truly, Pat

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

oh i like what you see Patricia:) keep placing your flowers they are truly lovely
Patricia Wedel

2 Weeks Ago

thank you bunny... you are a scholar and a gentleman... Pat
What I read is two soulmates in sync, absolute synchronicity in a shared moment, hour or evening, knowing with certainty what the other is thinking and wants. I see a randomness in words and structure that illustrates the mind flow only two synchronized souls might understand. Well done, sir!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

when I read a poem that touches me I always seem to place my finger on my lips I don't even realize.. read more
Different, delectable departure with a delicious stream of consciousness B.B.! “Traces..paces..spaces..Of your lines”- skimming words, mad rhymes, teasing rhythms and sensual metaphors abound. We feel your rapture and cheer you on. Daring, edgy meandering, this.....Well and artfully penned!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you Annette it was a bit of a bunny departure but i think it was fun tho
Loved your dialogue and disturbance and your thought, you magnify meaning with abstract therum nought, taste caress my face, go on you dirty b.....d, loved, loved, loved, and stood, misunderstanding

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks for the read Gram sorry for the confusion I think:)
' 'Tween those spaces - Of your lines - Witness - Gentle honor - Taste caresses my face - As I - '

Sometimes the best stream of blissful consciousness come from extraordinary places and faces. There's amazing warmth here but. eloquence leaves the reader's thoughts on just about the right side of ..

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

was hoping you would read this thought you might appreciate it. I don't usually just right stream. t.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

Smiling again
A gorgeous flow of thought. tender, gentle.
An intimate moment in time.
A state of mind .... one wants to longer on in it forever, Robert.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

hmm maybe I should keep going:) but then I would be dirty....
Mrudula Rani

3 Weeks Ago

At those heights of reflection only exists felicity !

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny or sometimes Flaccid Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in.. more..

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