Sound Stroll Scrawl

Sound Stroll Scrawl

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
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Think its done...

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 __Sound Stroll Scrawl__

Ear the cries collective symphony thrust

Standing Pendulant globe dizzying flux

Whispers of wants spectral litany crux

Motions movement marking meter

 Sway syncopates spinning specter

sound-wave streams

aloft I stride

 

Harmonic heralding sympathy stroll

Artisan poet sage kin synchrony souls

Petitioning bleed pleas sympathy scroll

Wretched witness wrapping wistful

Breaking barren bastions blissful  

basking blooms

ablaze I scry



© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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I read this sitting in front of a mirror.. I dunno why I did that but when I read it again the voice in me head spoke with a broad Welsh accent and I found a five pound note down the side of my chair.... I dont wanna blame the words mate but there is summat about those eyes...... I think I'm now done...... :)

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

thanks Nev you got a good un my ghosts usually just hide things
Neville Pettitt

3 Weeks Ago

we have Borrowers too though...



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there is no way in this life (maybe in another one :) ) that I can write something like this! honestly though it maybe a little hard for me to be on the track with this kind of flowing and words because I will be translating a lot during my reading, BUT let me tell You too, that I was rapping and warring with You, for me it was again about Your creation stage, the war with and for words, the inspiration that comes slowly, sometimes very intense, music always is my inspiration so this also have another dimension for me, You took us high, and with each last line of Your two verse You settled us down, then comes Your last line (ablaze I scry) leaving the door open, how much You will see, feel and write down? who really knows? well done my rhythmic friend Bunny*

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

beg to differ you paint passion like a zen master:) I am always obsessed with waves even when i don'.. read more
Light

3 Weeks Ago

and that’s when She thinks it’s an Apple then she discovers it’s an Orange 😄😳😊

I read this sitting in front of a mirror.. I dunno why I did that but when I read it again the voice in me head spoke with a broad Welsh accent and I found a five pound note down the side of my chair.... I dont wanna blame the words mate but there is summat about those eyes...... I think I'm now done...... :)

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

thanks Nev you got a good un my ghosts usually just hide things
Neville Pettitt

3 Weeks Ago

we have Borrowers too though...
Rhythm and musicality here Bunny, plus a bucket load of alliteration.
Motions, movement, marking meter, I am right there with you. This sounds great read aloud. The cat nodded in approval. Have a great day my friend.

Chris

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christine Anne Shaw

4 Weeks Ago

Heat wave here. Loving it :)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Weeks Ago

today is perfect for me in the high 70's and not too humid going to be bouncing around!:)
Christine Anne Shaw

4 Weeks Ago

Ah, we have the humidity which slows you down a bit. Enjoy Bunny :)
Read this backwards, and it's still brill.
I usually read quite quick, but the words kept rounding in my mouth.
So this tells me this is excellent for speech control.
You sure it's definitely done now.


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

hey Paul i honestly never feel a piece is finished more like its taking a break:) thank you so much:.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Month Ago

oops i just saw a change!!!!
Paul Bell

4 Weeks Ago

The sequel is on. lol

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Added on July 20, 2019
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Tags: stroll, sound, voices, collective, conscious, ethereal, motions, vibrations, authorship, past, specters, ghost, writers, continuance, furtherance, love

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zeni.. more..

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