Cursery Rhyme

Cursery Rhyme

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
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My Nursery rhyme for Momzilla's horror contest:)

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__Cursery Rhyme__

 

There was a farmer who had a child,
And limbo was his name-O.
L-I-M-B-O!
L-I-M-B-O!
L-I-M-B-O!
And Limbo was his name-O!

He didn’t live long but would not die,
And Limbo was his name-O.
(Snap)-I-M-B-O!
(Snap)-I-M-B-O!
(Snap)-I-M-B-O!

And Limbo was his name-O!

The farmer choked him when he was five,
And Limbo was his blame-O!
(Snap - Snap)-M-B-O!
(Snap - Snap)-M-B-O!
(Snap - Snap)-M-B-O!
And Limbo was his game-O!

So he soaked the boy in gel ignite
And Limbo was aflame-O.
(Snap - Snap - Snap)-B-O!
(Snap - Snap - Snap)-B-O!
(Snap - Snap - Snap)-B-O!
And Limbo was regained-O!

The boy returned to the farmers fright,
And Limbo wasn’t changed-No.
(Snap - Snap - Snap - Snap)-O!
(Snap - Snap - Snap - Snap)-O!

(Snap - Snap - Snap - Snap)-O!
And Limbo made his Sane-Go!

The farmer hanged himself that night,
For Limbo was his bane-O.
(Snap - Snap - Snapped - his - neck)
(Snap - Snap - Snapped - his - neck)
(Snap - Snap - Snapped - his - neck)
And Limbo won his Game-O!



© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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'.. Snap - Snap - Snap)-B-O! .... Snap - Snap - Snap)-B-O! .... (Snap - Snap - Snap)-B-O! .... And Limbo was regained-O! .... The boy returned to the farmers fright, .... And Limbo wasn’t changed-No. ....
(Snap - Sn '

Craziness defies the flame... headlines across the globe? Beware tales of the Unexpected, Bunny style - rhythmic, cataclysmic or - something. If I can remember all the words, will be lah-lahing all day. D****t!

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Days Ago

I just feel bad for the farmer look at his face sheer terror:)



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A nasty tale in the poem my friend. Amazing flow of words allowed the reader to feel these words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Days Ago

Thanks coyote speaking of coyotes I saw one yesterday in the middle of the city (got to be a tough o.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Days Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Shades of Stephen King's Pet Semetary only with a lilt. Nursery rhymes were always a result of tragedy, and yet some, such as your delightful take were funny in a profoundly dark way.

Excellent.

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Days Ago

So True Ted, many of them are creepy little things, it doesn't take much to horror them out they pra.. read more
so so SO creative dear Robert! I always knew Your mind to work in a unique way and here it's shining with that uniqueness! from the title into the last word! original in Your own way, well done my friend, I hope You will win, let us know when You do ;)

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Days Ago

thanks light there are some pretty clever poems in that contest already:) but i do enjoy writing the.. read more
f*****g loved the snap snap snap pop pop pop bang bang bang , I have my own tune im head don't know if there is a soundtrack I'm thinking Anthrax/ Public Enemy, bring the noise,

Posted 3 Days Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Days Ago

I was listening to Steve Reich music for typewriters funny you should say that:)
gram linski

2 Days Ago

is there genuinely music for typewriters, mine is usually the Meat puppets or Johnny cash,
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Days Ago

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LKXEOz-RyeQ
Rather disturbing and entertaining at the same timeo. :)

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Days Ago

now that is a compliment:) thanks Relic
'.. Snap - Snap - Snap)-B-O! .... Snap - Snap - Snap)-B-O! .... (Snap - Snap - Snap)-B-O! .... And Limbo was regained-O! .... The boy returned to the farmers fright, .... And Limbo wasn’t changed-No. ....
(Snap - Sn '

Craziness defies the flame... headlines across the globe? Beware tales of the Unexpected, Bunny style - rhythmic, cataclysmic or - something. If I can remember all the words, will be lah-lahing all day. D****t!

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Days Ago

I just feel bad for the farmer look at his face sheer terror:)
He didn't live long, but would not die? Ooooookaaay. Laughing tears. This should be made a skit on SNL.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Days Ago

he he thanks that was a fun one to write
Definetly a poem to ponder for its rich layers, subtle nuances and literary scholarship. I's say you went out on a lim, bo!
T

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Days Ago

thanks kentuck blame Momzilla she got me writing bunny style nursery rhymes
BAHAHA!!! falling off my rocker, This was such a delight, very cute. Much enjoyed this. Needless to say I am wide awake now. So cute

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Days Ago

he he they are fun:)
Kesch

5 Days Ago

I clicked on it, cause i thought maybe i may learn some new colorful words. LOL I love this, too fun.. read more
and Boris Karloff played the farmer?

Posted 6 Days Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

6 Days Ago

He wasn’t available so I had to settle for Bella lagosi:/
jacob erin-cilberto

6 Days Ago

ha ha ha ha...Count Farmer!

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Added on September 9, 2019
Last Updated on September 9, 2019
Tags: Limbo, Ghost, haunting, revenge, Humor, nursery rhyme

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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