Typetuning

Typetuning

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
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Bad Bunny played the typewriter to accompany my singing of these lyrics I apologize for the bad audio quality of my cell phone recording of this video:)

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Typetuning





I feel your eyes embracing me

Touching my lines enlacing thee

 

Dawns penned

And

Longs sent

Thru

Drawn bends

To

Swan scend

Your

Don

 

Must realize your faith in me

Grace to revise this enquiry

 

Ascend

The

Amend

To

Transcend

And

Brighten

Your

Song




© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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It's the little things that in the end will draw us closer together. The lilt of a well worn phrase, the slight c**k of an eyebrow, the inability to look you in the eye when embarrassed. You can miss a person or a personality, but only because you know at least a few of their secrets. Loved this.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

1 Week Ago

We should play a game of tag write one movement then tag someone yo write the next and so on.
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

In My resignation of lumen...your it
Cherrie Palmer

1 Week Ago

Okay get ready



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Whoa! I'm a bit dizzy here!!! Typing tapping away an atypical poem!
T

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Days Ago

hey hey Kentuck:) folks ask what my voice sounds like so I obliged (I sorta don't like my voice when.. read more
What a lovely voice you have Bunny. I was taken by surprise, especially with the tapping of the typewriter keys worked in to the arrangement. It was most effective and reminded me of Atonement, a film I saw where a tyiewriter's keys had also been used to create an interesting sound effect. I am smiling and sincerely hope you do feel my eyes embracing you as I read each of your carefully chosen words. A delight Bunny. Happy Thanksgiving my friend.

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

Wow I had to look that up to hear it I love it:) Steve Reich did some amazing music with typewriters.. read more
This could be read in many ways and that is its joy. A gentle place and love story.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

Hello my wandering friend:) I was Imagining (as I often do) that i could see/feel the reader as they.. read more
Your verse took on a lovely breath in your voice Robert, ( looking at your image I expected a contralto)your tender, sweet vocals lent delightful essence to your words and from now on every time I read your poems I will be imagining you singing.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

he he more of a tenor... I cant hit that high, LOL (wish I could) I can actually hit pretty low note.. read more
Love the opening lines..they just pull the reader right into
the intimacy of this piece .to know a person is to love them.those special details of love nice work

Posted 1 Week Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

Hi Fran:) thanks for the visit I have had this melody bouncing in my head for about a year I’m gla.. read more
Robert, this is certainly one of the most creative pieces I’ve experienced in the Cafe. Kudos on your continued creativity. You never cease to amaze us.

What I take away from this entire work is the power of subtlety, the little things that make us unique, and especially when recognized and appreciated by someone we love. Another remarkable creation from you.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Week Ago

I was hoping you would find this one I had a feeling you might like it:) thanks Mr Ray:)
R.E. Ray

1 Week Ago

I do like it! You’re one of the most authentic artists in the Cafe. Keep it coming.

Hey folks, get a load of the Bunny's typetune video up there in the vid box....treat yaself to summat completely different why dont'ya

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


well........ Bunny.......... and Robert ..... the voice brings a haunting sort of lilt to an intimate moment anyone who has had one will recognize... love the type keys clicking away and the time piece effect of the black and whites ... very creative ...... ah. ....you two :)))))))))))))))))))))
E.
ps I think maybe add a bugler bugling ... what do you think??? i just happen to have one ;}

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

Hmm i used to have a bugle... i think i sold it tho
Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

you can borrow mine ... or maybe Bunny would play :))))))))))))))))))))))

wowzah... and no kiddin, this is absolutely amazing Robert... maybe my ears but sounded pitch perfect my friend.. timing was sp;ot on and I wanna copy as soon as it is released.. your biggest little fan.. Me N:)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

thanks Nev I really need to get a better recording device the cell phone recorder isn't exactly the .. read more
Neville

2 Weeks Ago


Ah but'cha did it and ya did it so well.. my guess is being able to play the drums helps.. e.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

I am so flattered
How unique this is....there is something wonderful about the sound of typewriter keys clicking out the words your heart sings. It is intimate to read another poet's words....to get a peek into their souls. You allow us this with each one of your poems, Robert. As far as the video goes, it is wonderful if you ask me! Lydi**

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks O'lydia:) I still to this day hate to recite or even sing in public I get horrid stage fright.. read more

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Added on November 18, 2019
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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zeni.. more..

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