just an observation

just an observation

A Story by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

Yesterday I woke up at three am in a slightly inflated state…

The answer to a question I have oft asked myself was revealed…

Yes I do indeed write in my sleep now!

The disturbing element is I was in fact in an inflated state…

Not only do i remember writing in my sleep

but of whom I was writing! 

It was of a customer at my store of whom had a very large tatoo of her own face affixed prominently upon her forearm. 

I even remember the title of said dream writing...

Sightly

Im working on it now but I thought this would be a humorous tidbit:)

 

© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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My brain writes during sleep, but I fight it off sometimes and then regret it. Lots of lost poems there. Sounds like you’ve got a special arrangement with your mind where it doesn’t let you say no, haha. All the better for your catalog.

I wonder what makes someone get a tattoo of their own face on their arm. Definitely worth an exploration. She must be a compelling subject of study. I’m looking forward to seeing the poem you’ve got relating to your encounter with her.

Happy half-conscious writing, BB!

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Days Ago

this does not surprise me Eilis LOL:) I had always thought I did this was the first time I vividly .. read more



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Finally something I understand, lol, I have that problem/dream too sometimes, but the substance is usually gone, on waking, leaving only the bones behind, can't wait to read your poem about the customer with the Messiah complex, unless I already did, and didn't understand, keep up the mindfuckery poetry, B.

Posted 1 Day Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

1 Day Ago

LoL seems It’s been very vivid these dreams lately I keep a pad and paper next to my bed just in c.. read more
gram linski

1 Day Ago

I have a cat next to the bed that scratches f**k out of the duvet, 3.00am every morn what poetry I h.. read more
The subconscious is so powerful Bunny. Keeping things hidden. Bringing them to the surface in the dark hours of oblivion. You bring that out superbly here. I am looking forward to a pretty interesting story emerging from that dream.

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Days Ago

I finished the first poem that is called Sightly the second one is almost finished:)
DIVYA

2 Days Ago

And an interesting poem it is...I really like how you sketched her...
Almost all moments that hold us under their demand during daytime manifest at night in distinct patterns, robbing sleep. The more receptive you are to your contexture the more you are prone to its reign! You being a versatile artist is it any wonder you write poetry in your slumber?

Posted 2 Days Ago


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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Days Ago

it was a bit startling I actually woke up again with words hanging in my mind yesterday
Maybe you should sleep with a pen in your hand. Well maybe not, you'll probably poke your eye out. Interesting story though, sounds like your mind is kicking it into overdrive and we're about to be avalanched with bad bunny goodness. Have a good day, sir.

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Days Ago

LOL that reminds me of the "automatic writing" of the 70's
I write in my dreams also. My new story I am trying to write. "The island", came to me in a dream. Us, who love to read and write. The old mind always wandering around in words and thoughts. Always a pleasure to read your work Robert.
Coyote

Posted 4 Days Ago


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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Days Ago

ah I am in good company then:)
Bunny, Are you saying this dream person was "two-faced?" We can't get away from human foibles . . . even in our sleep!!!
T

Posted 4 Days Ago


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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Days Ago

I just finished the poem:) gonna post it now
Now we need to take a survey i write in my sleep as well.

Posted 4 Days Ago


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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Days Ago

I love you Cherrie!!!!! thanks for not letting me think I am crazy:)
Cherrie Palmer

4 Days Ago

Well either this is the norm for writers or we're crazy together
i wish i could write in my sleep & then remember it.
it surely must be more efficient 'cos you could get more done !
cheerio carola

Posted 5 Days Ago


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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Days Ago

Hi Carola I have always suspected that my mind mulls over composition in my sleep often before I go .. read more
Carola

4 Days Ago


wish i had half your luck.
your dream composition.... did you actually end up using i.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Days Ago

I just finished it this morning its called "sightly" :)
My brain writes during sleep, but I fight it off sometimes and then regret it. Lots of lost poems there. Sounds like you’ve got a special arrangement with your mind where it doesn’t let you say no, haha. All the better for your catalog.

I wonder what makes someone get a tattoo of their own face on their arm. Definitely worth an exploration. She must be a compelling subject of study. I’m looking forward to seeing the poem you’ve got relating to your encounter with her.

Happy half-conscious writing, BB!

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Days Ago

this does not surprise me Eilis LOL:) I had always thought I did this was the first time I vividly .. read more
i think i would do a tattoo of the back of my head...
people wouldn't be as offended...
j.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

5 Days Ago

I suppose there is no greater promotion than self promotion right?

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