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A Poem by Robert Trakofler

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Searching the slipstreams

of solicitations

in the scrawls of sentences

for a semblance of salience

in the scintillating

silent sparks of

the sentence

of my Sentience

Striking aches

Of solitude

To this 

sketch

© 2020 Robert Trakofler


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Such ssssssnaking alliteration here, dear Robert! Its a very neuro-scientific write, this one. Salience, sentience.....the philosophy behind the need to feel and what is felt, and in your case, what is felt and feels important in the lines you create or the lines you read. Your accompanying picture of the burned book just suits the poem so well. When words and lines are burn't beyond comprehension it creates an ache in the soul and a feeling of loss and loneliness. Its part meditation on writing and the self. Its a very interesting concept and your alliteration gives me the sounds of words and lines sizzling away to sorrow. A real thinker, this one. Much enjoyed! :))

Posted 2 Months Ago


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2 Months Ago

Its a fine memento, dear Robert. Just be thankful it wasn't your name on the cover! Lol.
Robert Trakofler

2 Months Ago

it does boggle the mind how they took the time to find my address and burn the book...should i be s.. read more
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2 Months Ago

Maybe it was a sizzling romance novel and the pages literally burned with sexual heat? Lol



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After reading your back-and-forth with Ana Papaya, considering your title, I think you might've meant this as "having no title" . . . but I see it differently. I'm thinking that, in this country we have the ENTITLED and the UNENTITLED . . . your poem describes the madness that I'm feeling these days as we brag about how quickly our economy will bounce back, if we could soon get back to making money instead of staying healthy & alive . . . and the UNENTITLED are the only ones noticing that so many necessities suddenly cost 2 & 3 times as much in our robust economy, which is dying to go gang-busters under Trump once again. Sorry my jadedness is dripping this morning. I better numb out on some pot before I solicit some harsh karma (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Robert Trakofler

1 Month Ago

oh Barley it is so nice to be understood thank you for this:) I could use a nice bit of sativa right.. read more
tongue twisting alliteration :)
needs a title! something along the lines of searching for meaning where none exists or maybe finding meaning where none existed

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Ana Papaya

2 Months Ago

Sky fishing
Fly fishing
Spy fishing

The possibilities are truly endless.. read more
Robert Trakofler

2 Months Ago

kk I change it for Ana:)
Ana Papaya

2 Months Ago

: ) nice!
Stunningly superb
silently shuddered
senses...........as you can see, this left me reeling and that kinda reeling can only come from excellent poetry weaving :) The process felt within this catharsis is exhilirating, excellent Robert, gave me a smile this morning :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

2 Months Ago

Good Morning Ruth that's the best way to wake, with a smile:) thank you for the view
Ahhhh the flourish of alliteration! I would give good money to hear Mel Blanc read this out loud. :))))
Can't even imagine a person who'd want to burn books, makes me squirm. You treat them like sentient beings here, who would feel the slow hissing(the alliteration probably used to mimic that sound?) burn as their body shrivels and blackens, losing its voice in the process. Makes me think of censorship which is the antithesis of art.


Posted 2 Months Ago


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Robert Trakofler

2 Months Ago

boom the sizzle sounds revealed dear Moon:) you are truly a clever mind!
Also "if you are lonely when you are alone, you are in bad company."

SUPREMELY SUPERB.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

2 Months Ago

Ayesha... I simply love that line:) you are waxing poetic lately my dear and thank you!
Ayesha

2 Months Ago

Probably a repercussion of your inspirational coffee that has made me verbose.
btw i was read.. read more
I swam in those slipstreams of solicitations. Sauntered in the scrawl of sentences. Sang for semblance of salience. Swooned in in the scintillating silent sparks of the sentence and now sit sighing in sweet solitude. I just loved this surreal poem, dear Bunny.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

2 Months Ago

Now this is how I like to wake up! Good morning Dhara:) You know that "oops" kitty walk where your c.. read more
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

2 Months Ago

Aww. I was right there when you switched the lights on. Didn't expect you coming! I hope you didn't .. read more
I got my stimulus check today. 1200 dollars. I cant describe in words how it feels to get something you didn't ask, beg, work, portion over, brow-beat, plant or prostitute for. I have a friend who poses all day long to take the perfect selfie. But poetry, sometimes, is a port where the smaller ships are moored' ;where sentience and affection meet holy in the air of purpose. No need for title if your feet aren't purple from walking the hole in the kitchen linoleum . And like my sister the psychic says: If you have a mouse, you are not alone.....nicely written...dana

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

2 Months Ago

My head is so screwed up these days I get so wrapped around my latest verse I forget the one before .. read more
Thufferin thuccotash thuper Bunny my lithpin tongue ith gettin thlippery n' runny
Oh, BTW. Found a BB belt

Posted 2 Months Ago


Robert Trakofler

2 Months Ago

Tharry dathe:/
Very unique poem about lonliness. I enjoyed it. c:

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

2 Months Ago

Hi Jung thanks, I'm glad you liked it
JungLee

2 Months Ago

You are welcome
I really like the flow of this poem. Sir, you sound like a rapper.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

2 Months Ago

hey Penny I can see that now it would indeed lend itself to a rap song LOL

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I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny Hello I’m Robert I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zenith It is also an antique store and a veget.. more..

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