Tell the World to Stop Spinning

Tell the World to Stop Spinning

A Poem by H.E Watson
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Poem about the feelings of immense loss.

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 Stop time, remove the church bell,

Take away the sun and the moon as well.

Say goodbye to the birds chirping in the trees,

Get rid of the colourful flowers and the bees.

 

Remove the memories of all these years,

Unplug the ocean, it will fill again with these tears.

Put a black sheet over the blue sky,

Close the shops, what I’ve lost you can’t buy.

 

Turn all the ground into ice,

Let the streets run ragged with mice.

Because inside my heart is so bare,

How could this world be so unfair?

 

The light at the end of the tunnel is a lie,

You try burying a loved one and saying  goodbye.

© 2020 H.E Watson


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It is an especially sad scenario
We still have each other but have lost many around us.
Strangely, and I am not trying to be sarcastic, I think it has been losing our well loved dogs which has been the most difficult to deal with.
Very sorry for your situation

Posted 4 Months Ago


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It is an especially sad scenario
We still have each other but have lost many around us.
Strangely, and I am not trying to be sarcastic, I think it has been losing our well loved dogs which has been the most difficult to deal with.
Very sorry for your situation

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am so sorry for your pain. the anger and lament are so palpable in this! Keep airing it out beat it into a pulp! Tell it to f**k off and maybe soon you might be able to let the healing begin

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Gee
This for me is very much a poor mans " Funeral blues" from 4 weddings, which is no bad thing.
Enjoyed the read H E W

Posted 6 Months Ago


H.E Watson

6 Months Ago

I just went online and saw a video from the movie, I see what you mean by that, they do have a simil.. read more
Gee

6 Months Ago

A good film and a great poem

there can be no mistaking, these words reflect a considerable and intense sense of loss and pain and grief even... thank you for reading me and requesting my friendship.. I am happy to oblige :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


H.E Watson

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much :)
Neville

6 Months Ago


you are most welcome, tis my pleasure :)

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H.E Watson
H.E Watson

Northern Ireland , United Kingdom



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