Man's Downfall (The Primordial Series)

Man's Downfall (The Primordial Series)

A Poem by Joshua777
"

Written unknown | A haiku poem

"

Will man ever learn?

They can’t live without nature,

Or else they will die.

© 2020 Joshua777


Author's Note

Joshua777
Hello, thank you so much for reading!

If you would like to leave a comment and/or rate, that would be well appreciated as I am open to any feedback!

I hope you have a nice rest of the day!

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I liked this one quite a lot. Sometimes a sentence with simple words can lead to a greater connection or a more powerful poem. Although I love long complex poems, sometimes I find a sentence or two say can say something complex and emotional, as it leaves the reader thinking, and is the foundation that can be many different houses, depending on viewpoint.

Posted 5 Days Ago


I feel like you should add more about what nature is about and what's in nature, but other than that it's good

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joshua777

2 Weeks Ago

You just gave me the idea of actually adding a bit of a background on some poems, such as this one.<.. read more
Lacey Sue

1 Week Ago

I read everyone's work

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

34 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on July 28, 2020
Last Updated on July 29, 2020
Tags: haiku, man, downfall, short

Author

Joshua777
Joshua777

PA



About
I started writing poetry at 14 inside an ‘Intro to Poetry’ class which turned out to be less fun because of the restraints of the assignments, so poetry fell away from me soon after. A .. more..

Writing