Winter's Advent (The Primordial Series)

Winter's Advent (The Primordial Series)

A Poem by Joshua777
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Written unknown | A haiku poem

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It is getting cold,

Winter is creeping slowly,

Don’t let him catch you.

© 2020 Joshua777


Author's Note

Joshua777
Background | A poem made for a 9th grade Intro to Poetry class, I do not remember what the requirements was for this, it has been a long time.
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At my age, I can't creep any other way than slowly. I just hope winter isn't a sprinter.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joshua777

1 Week Ago

Luckily for you, it is not sprinter, haha!
I thought here about animals in winter being hunted. I saw a hunter stalking a deer and hoped the hunter was outwitted.

Chris

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joshua777

1 Week Ago

That is an interesting visual you have here and a twist as well with the deer outwitting the person.
Quiet interesting to read winter poetry at middle of hot summer. I find always winter more peaceful then creepy. I was wondering who is that person or element what can catch you.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joshua777

2 Weeks Ago

Ah, your comment reminded me that this class was in the fall marking period, so it makes sense I was.. read more
Martin Pahorek

2 Weeks Ago

Alright I see now. Well some winter can be quite pleasant. What I like about winter is most animals .. read more

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Added on July 29, 2020
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I started writing poetry at 14 inside an ‘Intro to Poetry’ class which turned out to be less fun because of the restraints of the assignments, so poetry fell away from me soon after. A .. more..

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