Storm Kissed Sounds

Storm Kissed Sounds

A Poem by LKBillips
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Rainy morning musings....came to me while driving to work.

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Storm kissed Sounds

 

The morning rises

to the darkest hues

with steel grey skies

and misty views

 

The pale moon hidden

No sun to see

Stuck somewhere

In Purgatory

 

The rain it seeps

 into the bones

wilted marrow

brittle stones

 

Storm kissed sounds

They make me swoon

But I must yield

To the new day soon

 

I long to stay

Within the folds

Of gentle blankets

And loving holds

 

But alas fair reader

I must abide

And face the day

At least I tried

 

LK Billips

 


© 2018 LKBillips


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Love your journey of craving, then acceptance, done with strong rhyme & rhythm. I'm so hungry for rain here in drought-stricken California, I was expecting something different when I clicked on your poem. I love being surprised by the unexpected. I love how you describe a rainy day in stark & intriguing ways using all the senses (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LKBillips

1 Year Ago

Thanks for stopping by, Glad I surprised you!!



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It's nice to know going to work can bring such joy.
A drive through the unexpected.
Only spoiled by actually reaching work, hate that.


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LKBillips

4 Months Ago

Thanks for reading and commenting! Yeah work really ruins the day. :)
I like this. The struggle of getting out of the bed and face another day, I can relate. ..
Your flow here is brilliant, very smooth piece of writing. I love your title too.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely conveyed. Strong imagery and you really nailed the flow. One of those mornings when you would do anything to stay in bed longer. Well done.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love your journey of craving, then acceptance, done with strong rhyme & rhythm. I'm so hungry for rain here in drought-stricken California, I was expecting something different when I clicked on your poem. I love being surprised by the unexpected. I love how you describe a rainy day in stark & intriguing ways using all the senses (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LKBillips

1 Year Ago

Thanks for stopping by, Glad I surprised you!!
We were in blanket land this morning

Then saw the light was brighter through the curtains
Up and making plans to 'drive away' one - dry day - soon I/we hope

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

simple prove a point and your simple defiantly proves a point. This is good writing

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LKBillips

1 Year Ago

Thanks Wyrn!
Excellent wordage, conjuring images and feelings throughout. Who of us hasn't wanted to stay within those warm folds? For me, hot coffee is the only help.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LKBillips

1 Year Ago

Me too Samuel me too! Definitely a coffee fueled morning! Thanks for reading.

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