Unsleep

Unsleep

A Poem by Rasheeq Taheer
"

I don't fall asleep

"
As the night gets darker,
The moonlight is the only thing seen on the streets,
Even the stray dogs have fallen asleep;
My mind and my self stay wide awake,
Waiting for something,
Or someone,
Or maybe you instead.

© 2018 Rasheeq Taheer


Author's Note

Rasheeq Taheer
An unexplainable experience people often go through, even I did as well, when someone falls for someone

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Ah! What a beautiful image it creates in mind. Bravo

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rasheeq Taheer

10 Months Ago

I'm glad it could make one in your mind. Thanks for reading! :)
I have had this feeling many times and agree with the first comment. The imagery although short made me picture the scene which helped me identify with the poem. Nice short poem with a clear meaning. Well done!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rasheeq Taheer

10 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and also sharing what you think about it
Ah, love does tend to do that, tiptoe around, stealing sleep one bedroom at a time. :):)

S

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rasheeq Taheer

10 Months Ago

Ikr :) thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts
Verse

10 Months Ago

My pleasure.
I wish this was a bit longer! But you still managed to express so many emotions in a short poem. I can understand your emotions. Just hope that you feel better soon.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rasheeq Taheer

10 Months Ago

I'm pretty okay. Just was very busy. I'm so sorry I couldn't be active here at all. How are you thou.. read more
Najam Us Saher

10 Months Ago

I am fine, it's okay everyone gets busy some or the other time. No worries, take care.
Rasheeq Taheer

10 Months Ago

Thanks and you too.
Midnight scribbles are the resultant of a heart's deep feelings, sometimes....here it feels the same....thanks for sharing this and that image! :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rasheeq Taheer

10 Months Ago

True. Thank you for reading! :)
NO MORE

10 Months Ago

welcome :)
close your eyes,close your mind
your prince charming is not far behind

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rasheeq Taheer

10 Months Ago

Well, my princess* is actually someone else's queen. So closing my eyes will just be like having a d.. read more
 wordman

10 Months Ago

my pleasure

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Added on August 25, 2018
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Rasheeq Taheer
Rasheeq Taheer

Dhaka, Bangladesh



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