She'll Kill Me

She'll Kill Me

A Story by Maryum Mazhar

Something I thought of right now. - Maryum Mazhar


She’s coming.

I think it is three in the night...could be more.


Horrific thoughts run through my mind.

Blood. Veins ripped apart. My head showcased on her wall.


My pulse is racing..... My palms are sweaty, even though the night is dark and cold. I am trying to save myself, from inevitable doom. My ears are deafened by the silence, and the beating of my heart against my chest.  This cannot be happening. I’m too young to die. I almost smile at the thought, but then click back into sense. This was no was a matter of life and death.


Voices.... Voices are heard.... She’s coming.  It won’t be long now.

I can hear her talk. “You are doomed, child” “No more chances anymore.”  “You must face the consequences” 


STOP!!!.... I scream in my head. The thought of her makes beads of sweat  form around my brows.

I am pacing back and forth in the empty dark house, from room to room. How do I get out of this? My eyes search around the house, but I cannot find what I am trying to find, my key to life.


I fall back into my bed, but I cannot find comfort, for in only a little time, I will have to face her. I wonder how she will finish me off.


It is almost seven o’ clock now. I have no time left now.

For a brief moment, I visualize myself lying in a pool of my own blood.  No! I have to live!

Suddenly, it hits me! I remember! Or I think I do...


I start to race in the direction of the living room.  In my attempt to run, I trip...






I look at my watch. 7: 05.

I still have time. I get up and speed into the living room, and I can feel  lumps under the carpet with my hand. I was right!! I push my hands under the carpet, and pull it out. Hope  lightens my world.


There it is; my key to life.

I look at the it, the book. Twilight Saga: Eclipse, it reads.

Thank you, god, I love you. I won’t have to pay that terrible librarian woman fine for not returning my book on time....AGAIN!


I am saved.



© 2011 Maryum Mazhar

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Oh My God..!!
What I thought it will be, n what actually came out.. 'Twilight-Eclipse Saga' ..hehe..
Nice one.. Really holded me till the end. and 'I am Saved' too ^-^

Posted 7 Years Ago

Brilliantly written and with quite the unique twist. I thought this was gonna go in a completly different direction, although i dont want to meet your librarian...

Posted 8 Years Ago

WOW lol I was really suprised at the end!! Well done! =)

Posted 8 Years Ago

really interesting what you did there ! quite an adventure! loved it

Posted 8 Years Ago

This really is a great story! I was completely blown away by the end :-)

Posted 8 Years Ago

How are you? i hope all is well with you, i hope you may not know me, and i don't know who you are, My Name is Miss esther, i am just broswing now i just saw your profile it seams like some thing touches me all over my body, i started having some feelings in me which i have never experience in me before, so i became interested in you, l will also like to know you the more,and l want you to send an email to my email address([email protected]) so l can give you my picture for you to know whom l am. I believe we can move from here! I am waiting for your mail to my email address (s/t/h/e/r/b/a/b/y/2/0/1/1/at/h/o/t/m/a/i/l/dot/c/o/m) (Remeber the distance or colour does not matter but love matters alot in life) miss esther

Posted 8 Years Ago

Seriously, this was great! lol I meant to say seriously because I know how much you hate it when people take this writing seriously. Great write.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Wow....that was

Posted 8 Years Ago

LOL! I thought someone was coming after her to kill her! Loved the idea and how you did a total plot twist at the end!

Posted 8 Years Ago

A fun and very original idea as well. Nice work.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on October 5, 2011
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Maryum Mazhar
Maryum Mazhar

Mississaauga, Canada

So weird. My old about-me still said I'm 14. Well, I'm 16 now, I feel like the person who made this account wasn't me. Anyway, Hi! My name is Maryum. I draw, write and eat. more..


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