Hey, you there?

Hey, you there?

A Poem by May

very touchy poem for me..

He ponders alone
yet he has no thoughts
no emotions to cut

still-he cuts through the pain

isn't he unfeeling?
no, he just needs closure
he wants to be loved
but he never opens his eyes

See that this girl loves you

you remain inferior, to my demise

yes, you are right
you're not worth living

because if you are alive

then why are you so cold?

© 2009 May

Author's Note

it doesn't seem like it means alot, but this might be the death of me- hah- or him... damnn- that;s seriously sadistic and fucked up.. what is wrong with me?? whew... okay whatever.. here it is. fuck- i don't even want you bitches to read this, i just put this on here cause i don't have my book anymore..

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I liked it... many people only make these metaphorical and heavly elaborated poems/stories. I like these writings too but I think that honest words are simply the best ones.

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Added on December 31, 2009
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I'm not super good at writing, but every once in a while i'll spit out something cute. more..

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