I can’t Save You

I can’t Save You

A Poem by Sami Vish

Found this hiding under my bed

I can't save you
And I don't want to
Save yourself for once
Trust me
You’ll feel so much better
You don't want my bed
You want my safety
All you want is security
It's why you go after people who are older
You want them to shelter you
You don't need shelter
Trust me
You’ll be fine all alone

© 2018 Sami Vish

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Somehow i feel like this is personally attacking me. But this is written in second person so speaking directly to the intended reader must be the intention.
i like it.

Posted 1 Year Ago

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Sami Vish

1 Year Ago

Ha! Do you tend to go after older lovers? Lol

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Added on December 9, 2018
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Sami Vish
Sami Vish

Las Cruces, NM

Hi, my name is Sami Vish. I'm 27 years old. I've been writing poetry and fiction since I was seven. Writing was my first passion, singing was my second, and now creating a better world for us to live .. more..