Fellowship Flowing

Fellowship Flowing

A Poem by barleygirl
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inspired by photo, photographer unknown . . .

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moon and river tryst
pussywillows twinkletoe
and tulles tango

gurgle gathering
moonbeams on a river stroll
evening escapade

lunar rendezvous
reminiscent reflections
waterway welcome

rippled and moonlit
river rallies ricochet
charming rapscallion

moon moans: unity
bullfrog concurs with a croak
fellowship flowing

© 2021 barleygirl


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we should all be creatures of nature, then maybe we would communicate better.
You have no problem with that and your poems are a wonderful departure from all of the serious writes that get us angry or sad, although those do need to be written as well.
j.

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barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

Many are writing/talking/reporting about the dreary stuff (since there's tons of it) and hardly anyo.. read more



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Nature with all
Its inhabitants
flowing together
in perfect harmony
oh that it were that
easy for humans
love these haiku
sets such a nice
joyful write with
fine alliteration
throughout

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barleygirl

2 Days Ago

Your words flow onto the page like the moonlight sparkles across this river! Thanks for flowing alon.. read more
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a stunning Haiku set, of how creatures of nature adapt to each other. I love "moon and river tryst"...and "fellowship flowing" just shows us the bond that is formed among them; your words are always dramatic and eventful. Humans should get along that well!!
Amazing!!
Best always, Bet + hugs

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barleygirl

2 Days Ago

Sometimes when I read your poetry about nature, I've noticed that you inject yourself into the story.. read more
Betty Hermelee

2 Days Ago

Thanks for reading and it's true!


i'm about to put up chp 11 cool joe, you ne.. read more
I've always thought this but your vocabulary is smart and entertaining. High level poet.

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barleygirl

1 Week Ago

This means a bunch, coming from you! Thanks for the treat (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie
This a lovely flow of rhyme and rhythm Margie. The image of the moon above the water has triggered a cascade of nature's images all flowing along in your inimitable style. I like the bullfrog line as if he is commenting too. Fellowship flowing is a nice conclusion and suggests as you often do a oneness with nature.
We are having a hard wintry spell here and I'm just recovering from a slow snow run up our local hill with a fun bum slide back down.
Cheers,
Alan

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barleygirl

1 Week Ago

Thank you for your kind & complimentary words! I notice it's a bit snowy in your neck of the woods, .. read more
What a picture you paint. So easily I could see myself sitting on a dock or riverbank and take in all the beauty you describe. The quiet lapping of the water against the dock combined with the chorus of frogs. Thank you for this, my little vacation.
Take care - Dave

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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barleygirl

1 Week Ago

When I saw this photo, trying to conjure up something romantic, I saw the moon and the river being i.. read more
Now this is the kind of background accompaniment that makes a late night stroll so appealing, hearing nature's rhythm in all its glory... Except for the Califirnian bullfrog, that confusing little sh"t can p*ss off. Let me explain...
Bloody Hollywood, confusing the hell out of the worlds kids by making every kid think frogs go ribbit. The Californian frog goes ribbit and that's it. Every other kind of frog has its own noise, ours is a bit like a fast burp, but thanks to Hollywood, I grew up thinking my ears were broke.
Okay, I'm calm again, after a reread. (they make a really different noise if you stick a straw up its a*s and blow really hard. Just remember it isn't a capri sun pouch and suck)
I went for a wander last night and all I could hear were trees groaning under the weight of snow. It was quite a short walk, as after the first "tree groan" I had to run home and change my undies 😊
But nothing quite beats nature. Townies might ha E takeout and skinny mochachocalattefrappacinos 24/7, but give me this scene any day... If only we could do something about those frogs.
Straw anyone? 😊


Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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barleygirl

1 Week Ago

This is a magnificent share! Thank you for rattling on until my teeth rattled! Love it! I'm sorry yo.. read more
Lorry

1 Week Ago

Snowing in Texas??? Isn't that the first sign the apocalypse is on its way? 😊
you are that bullfrog tell the truth barley you turn into a creature every night and bound about the forest I have finally figured you, out... you are nature disguised as a human no wonder I like you so much how can anyone dislike nature just maybe (human) nature on occasion

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

I do have a special affinity for frogs & lizards, which are plentiful here & which often traipse thr.. read more
ah and and Emily word used..."tulles" Yay!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

I worried that anyone would know that word . . .
we should all be creatures of nature, then maybe we would communicate better.
You have no problem with that and your poems are a wonderful departure from all of the serious writes that get us angry or sad, although those do need to be written as well.
j.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

Many are writing/talking/reporting about the dreary stuff (since there's tons of it) and hardly anyo.. read more
moon moans: unity
bullfrog concurs with a croak
fellowship flowing

(asked very quietly in case wrong) is the fellowship and unity sexual?

Beautiful imagery Margie - definitely does the picture justice!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

2 Weeks Ago

Helen, I like to write my poems in an open-ended way & hopefully different people will read it in al.. read more

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