"Lorsqu’un adulte entre dans le monde des fables il ne peut plus en sortir.”
(When an adult enters the world of fables he cannot get out.)
― Hugo Pratt Cort Maltese en Siberie
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I felt an overwhelming sadness upon reading. It was as though I opened the door into wonderland and each character acted quite differently than I know them to be, and when I tried to leave, it was like Hotel California.....
Loved your rhyming... in this, we all shall be.
Posted 1 Month Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
1 Month Ago
You! You're here! Thank you for stopping by this dark Wonderland... it's lighter now.
I felt an overwhelming sadness upon reading. It was as though I opened the door into wonderland and each character acted quite differently than I know them to be, and when I tried to leave, it was like Hotel California.....
Loved your rhyming... in this, we all shall be.
Posted 1 Month Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
1 Month Ago
You! You're here! Thank you for stopping by this dark Wonderland... it's lighter now.
I loved the dance of stories my friend. Sometimes life feels like a nursery rhyme. Hello from cold and rainy Michigan. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I did enjoy.
Coyote
Posted 2 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Month Ago
My friend, so grateful for your company here. Hoping your Michigan comes up sunny and spring-like so.. read moreMy friend, so grateful for your company here. Hoping your Michigan comes up sunny and spring-like soon!
We are eternal in our words that we bleed up the pages with our soul and heart.
I love the lines referred to Alice in wonderland and the lines about the grim reaper. Our time is short but we can live a thousand different lives in mere mortal time
Posted 2 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
1 Month Ago
You see the soul of the words so well. Thank you for stopping in!
1 Month Ago
Sometimes I see the soul of the word loud and clear other times it’s a bit blurry lol
I love how you worked a "Alice in wonderland" in here, I enjoyed your write and the layout as well.
Wish I knew how you did the color background, that is really nice.
There is some truth in this write as well, I enjoyed this write. Awesome job!
Softly entrancing, just like a midnight dream. Once the words are spoken, I can hardly take my eyes off of them. The poem is as a brew for a good night's sleep, even when the twists and turns of fate are not so pleasant, they are regardless of the chapters of a wonderous story, a magical melody.
It was an extremely pleasant read, like a ride you'd find in a magical theme park. The words, the colours, and the details, blossoming upon reading made it so endearing and magical.
Thank you for sharing your poem, author An owl on the moon, I wish you a nice day~!
Posted 4 Months Ago
1 Month Ago
Smiling at your kind words, so thankful you stopped and shared them here with me. Needing that nice .. read moreSmiling at your kind words, so thankful you stopped and shared them here with me. Needing that nice day wish as well!
Owl,
You are true, our stories are the only existence we have everything else is just us as "ugly bags of mostly water, bouncing through our lives like a pinball. A successful poem, indeed.
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2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
Yet t.. more..