AN ODE TO HER POETIC TOUCH

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"And your very flesh shall be a great poem..."

~ Walt Whitman

 

 

We form a villanelle

Two rhymes, in you I dwell…

Alliteration on my lips…

 

Creating liquid lines

Dripping meter in rich designs

Poetic honey sensuality…

 

Your Haiku hands

A 5-7-5 rhythm we understand

Couplets of pressing forms…

 

A stanza in your arms

Laughing in your limerick charms

Quatrain nights of bliss…

 

Read no lyric sweeter

Dancing in iambic-pentameter

Free verse over me…

 

My fingers reach

For your sonnet skin of peach

Your lullaby-lyric lips…

 

My words a rune

Uttered in a prose blue moon

An epic to your beauty…

 

And in your eyes

I listen for unwritten sighs

You are my poetry…

Reviews

[Amy Craig Beasley]

wit and beauty - intertwined --- I love the beginning the middle and the end --- the nod to Whitman is a nice touch -- words becomeing flesh becoming words again - we are what we say - an incarnation -- and what better time to read this than on the verge of Christ mass day ~

[SOUL LESS]

Beautiful...amazing the way u used the poetic forms to symbolize...Craig u're a writer to watch for!
85/100

[.]

ahh..the last line says it all..delightful blend of poetic metaphor..

[Doreen]

This is beautiful! I love the way you used the forms to illuminate poetic beauty. This is such a wonderful creation.

[Denise]

*sigh* I just love stopping by to read your work...so peaceful, dreamy...absolutely lovely poem! 100% yet again, you never disappoint!

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Enjoyed this one immensely...Using the forms of poetry to write the work was great..I have seen this done before but this is the best one that I have ever read..Very creative indeed..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...I appreciate your kind review..Head lice are not anything new in the schools...Daddy said his sister went home with a friend then momma found head lice..If one doesn't get on those things they will infect the whole family..Sunflower

[Dezaraye]

I truly love this. I love how you've merged love into poetry. It's really stunning.

[Helen Woodward]

She's a lucky girl Craig and you are a fabulous poet. This is stunning and demonstrates your knowledge of poetic verse and excellence...
Just brilliant my friend!!

Cheers,

Helen~

[A.Lee]

Not that this doesn't have enough reviews already, but this is excellent! I love comparison of a love interest to poetry... both beautiful, soothing, sensual. Excellent write. You captured this beautifully.