alfabet soop end missfit spell chuckers

alfabet soop end missfit spell chuckers

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

alfabet soop end missfit spell chuckers


i'd like to have wrote books
but I ain't too well at this righting thing

maybee sum day I will get the hanging of it
loose the noose of what holds me back

and maybe due a good poem or such
if I could only remember to where
I losed my pin, pan
no, pen

pon my recollection their
wasn't no words to right with

at least in my poor 
imagification.



erin-cilberto
8/3/21

© 2021 jacob erin-cilberto


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don't be a frettin' bout the
righting thing I caint right
neither ..lol love this one
with its humor...well done

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

ha ha, thanks for your clever reply...
j.
Very clever !!! Love a good piece that outlines humor, nothing is ever that serious.
Thanks for sharing, this is great.
Marina

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

thank you, Marina....'
j.
So cool
I loved this Jacob
Well dun

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

Thank you, my friend,
j.
very clever and humorous write...i enjoyed the originality and flow to this...as well as being relatable in regards to spell check
(it’s never “duck” btw) eh. very enjoyable ink

~ x

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

ha ha, thank you for the smile, barrie.
Glad this could give you a chuckle.
j.
ms. barrie

1 Month Ago

you’re welcomed, jacob...always my pleasure ~ x
A fun write, so amusing. Taking a pot shot at spellings, So many just don't seem to care. That alphabet spaghetti in days of yore, certainly proved popular. We all made words out of soup.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

thank you, Chris...also kind of taking a pot shot at the spell checkers that don't always work.
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Whoever I misspell something I blame it on spell check, LOL. A very humorous peace of riting.

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

thank you, Cowboy...glad it could bring you a smile.
j.
lol. very clever and crafty. hits right in the face, squarely between the eyes with no shame. i ain't gut no spilling problems and i don't eat alpha bits - i use what's left of my own noodle ... :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Imagify all the people, living life in pea-e-e-e-e-as would make a muchly betterer song and would go so well with living in a lemon jellybean too! 😊
Please be careful though Jacob, when writing poems with food though, as I learnt to my cost with third degree burns with my alphabetti pasghetti senryu. Funny how doing it cold only occurred to me quarter of a second after saving it from boiling over.
I use scrabble tiles and fridge magnets these days, just to be safe... And unrestrained 😊

Posted 1 Month Ago


Hey, Jacob, you misspelled Alphabit. The ph is tricky. :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

oh krape, I did, didn't I?
Thank you, matt...I will work on improoving that.
j.
An excellent title and a clever take on language and those who abuse it with lack of form, structure, grammar and an imagination. Crack the whip Jacob on them or wave your ruler. You are the pro and professor.

Posted 1 Month Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

1 Month Ago

I was also kind of poking at the spell checkers which only work about 60% of the time.
We nee.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

Hehehe! All true and well said. You are welcome sir Jacob.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at two community colleges and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. Friending works two ways. If we have had .. more..

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