Reflection

Reflection

A Poem by Kiera Scanlon

I am the erotic sensation that tingles your spine,
The provoking fascination that confuses your mind.

I am a creature of the word.
Which word?
Every word.

I am the scars than run deep and stain your soul,
The amplified misunderstandings of a past untold.

I am the spine, the blade, the sharpest point,
May I show you my neatly decorated knife?

© 2013 Kiera Scanlon


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
_
I am the erotic sensation that tingles your spine,
ME: *thinks deeply*....SUGAR???

The provoking fascination that confuses your mind
ME: *keeps thinking*


May I show you my neatly decorated knife?
ME: You can show me yours if I show you mine!!!!!! :D

TEEHEE AWESOME!

Posted 8 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

I can't even choose a favorite line! It is all so wonderfully strong and great stand alone lines....Brava!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


"I am the erotic sensation that tingles your spine," It's must be something sweet.
"The provoking fascination that confuses your mind." Oh, chocolate!

I really like this. Dark n enough to scare me

I like this sentences
"I am a creature of the word.
Which word?
Every word."

"May I show you my neatly decorated knife?" Oh, yes please~

Really great job! ^^

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To me this was like 2poems, one more erotic, inviting. The other darker and more ominous.. to me saying you are mystery and beware I bite so don't mess with me.. I have also been known to have no idea about what I've read..lol I loved the idea of being every word. This can take you in so many directions all at once. ~~ redzone

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am the spine, the blade, the sharpest point,
May I show you my neatly decorated knife?

Darkly beautiful. Erotica is much sharper than a knife. Good job here darling. Sandar.. .

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deep and pointed piece of poetry. Dark and a bit forbidding yet compelling.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, I agree completely erotica is a slasher. But "creature of every word" you also by default made me want to be an artisan love too not just a slasher of innocence. Curiously, it was so. I wouldn't change a word of it. Wonderful write. Is it than, or that in the line, "I am the scars than run deep and stain your soul." If that is all anyone can catch you saying they are being too picky. I'm sorry about that. My bad.


Posted 7 Years Ago


You are a book,speaking the thoughts of unknown writers with imaginations that wander through the thoughts every person has some time or another.............

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very dark but oh so beautiful! Really a great piece!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Really enjoyed "amplified misunderstanding of a past untold".
I am torn on the last line. On the one hand you abandoned your rhythm, on the other you changed it up in a witty way.

Be cautious with your repetition of spine. I don't think spine is your main point, but saying it twice gives It weight.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A good fit of words and choices, your visual in small form factor is unique. I love it.

Posted 7 Years Ago



Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

22230 Views
76 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 4 Libraries
Added on March 22, 2012
Last Updated on February 10, 2013

Author

Kiera Scanlon
Kiera Scanlon

waterford, Ireland



Writing
A Face A Face

A Poem by Kiera Scanlon



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Voices Voices

A Poem by Kiera Scanlon


Downfall Downfall

A Poem by A. Amos