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A Poem by Kiera Scanlon

You are the pain,
I have learnt to endure,
My weakest temptation,
Awakening my hidden sensations,
Infesting my mind,
With drowning memories,
Tales of happily ever afters,
Interlocking dreams,
Destiny,
Disaster?
On the inside I am slowly weeping,
But on the outside,
I pose,
Carved on my face,
A smile of determination,
Encorcelled eyes, consumed lust,
Nothing,
But,
Illusions.

© 2014 Kiera Scanlon


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Nicely written and relatable. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Great work:) Kiera:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Posted 7 Years Ago


A story of someone lost in love. Confusion and indecision. Wonderful poetry.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Good lines, again sweet and simple and short to the mark.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is an excellent piece of writing...wonderfully done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


great piece...good structure and good progression of the poems premise.

Posted 7 Years Ago


You express well how people can make us happy and sad at the same time. Good choice of words and line: Infesting my mind, Awakening my hidden sensation, and with drowning memories. Excellent!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like the meaning that you gave this poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Amazing poem i can't wait to read more keep them coming

Posted 7 Years Ago


More good statements in the poem for the title. I like the words "Illusion." I like the flow of thoughts and the purpose of the poem. Easy to fake the face to the real world. Inside you can be dying and outside we won't allow anyone in to help. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Kiera Scanlon
Kiera Scanlon

waterford, Ireland



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