Much Awaited Road

Much Awaited Road

A Poem by Rashi Jain
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All about Remembering

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I was on a road,

That I thought would lead me to you,

Stretching my neck to see your sign,

In between those two bent trees,

That was hardly visible from where I was standing,

Not sure if there existed a sign like that.

For my eyes knew their pleasure,

When they used to see yours,

My heart knew it's beats,

When the used to sense yours.

But I then Realized,

It was a dream,

For there was no such road now,

Only a vast barren land,

That carried your dry footprints moving away from me,

For now I know they cannot turn back,

For the soil isn't moist anymore.


© 2017 Rashi Jain


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Rashi Jain
This 16 year old poet awaits your feedback. ❤

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"Much Awaited Road" is a very catchy title you've come up with. Liked the way how lovingly it's penned. The real nice feelings of love are well poured down in this poetry.. along with your heartbeats. Nice imagery. Looking forward to reading your work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

3 Years Ago

I am so glad you found it like this. :) Thank-you so much. :)
Wórdsmíth

3 Years Ago

Anytime, gurl.



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I loved the title..I loved the way you expressed your emotions..I can feel them as I read the poem..I really loved your imagery...
Keep on writing...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you so much ❤
I like the imagery. Very moving. Keep the faith while wandering in the wilderness:-)
Tenth line "they"?

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Years Ago

Thank-you 💕
I adore this, it's full of longing and is beautifully written, keep up the great work :D

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

3 Years Ago

Thank-you 💕❤
I was imagining all the lines along with the emos.
Nicely done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

3 Years Ago

Thank-you 💕❤
Touching read, beautifully done....enjoyed :) x

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

3 Years Ago

Thank-you 💕❤
your thought are really touching the hearts of reader go with this
thanks for sharing this
have a such good every day


Posted 3 Years Ago


Rashi Jain

3 Years Ago

Thank-you for your Review 💕
You are right dear Rashi.
"For now I know they cannot turn back,
For the soil isn't moist anymore."
The above lines are true. After the pain stole away the good memories. You can't go back. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rashi Jain

3 Years Ago

Thank-you so much 💕
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome Rashi.
There is such sadness when reality becomes only a dream. Hope seems lost. This is a sad one.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rashi Jain

3 Years Ago

I'm glad you found its essence. Thank-you 💕
You have come with really good combination love and dream in present time

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rashi Jain

3 Years Ago

Thank-you 💕
There's a real tragedy in this.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rashi Jain

3 Years Ago

I'm glad you could make out. Thank-you 💕

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Rashi Jain
Rashi Jain

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