Waiting to Wave Back

Waiting to Wave Back

A Poem by Rashi Jain
"

I wish for him to come back soon

"
Standing some steps away from his presence,
I felt my whimpered face turning plain
and my sighs feelable.
I couldn't move my eyes away from him
with my neck forced towards right
as my eyebrows frowned
while seeing the distance turning big.

I stood as I looked back,
When I saw him locking his fingers when he held my hand,
and falling into my eyes with the brightest passion that I love to Sense,
and when I saw us sharing the same cup of coffee,
with I lying in his fine homely arms.

And then I caught sight of him,
Going miles away from me,
As his back was turning towards my face.
I stood all still
and I couldn't raise my hand to wave,
for I do it only when he comes towards me.
For I never thought,
saying goodbye is so dense and cold,
And I still stand there,
To wave back.

© 2017 Rashi Jain


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Rashi Jain
This seventeen year old poet awaits your feedback ❤☯

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It is so romantic poem..You know as a write I always wanted to write something about love but I never could write because I never felt it or even if I felt it for someone I was oblivious of my feelings..I am happy that I am having someone here who writes so romantic poem as I really love reading them and the way you write it , an entire picture was painted in front of my eyes..You know someone can write so well about so complicated things like love when you yourself feel that..You must be in love with someone to write such beautiful poems..Anyway , I love your poems and I want to read and review each one of them..You are indeed a great writer....
Keep on writing...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you so much ❤



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It is so romantic poem..You know as a write I always wanted to write something about love but I never could write because I never felt it or even if I felt it for someone I was oblivious of my feelings..I am happy that I am having someone here who writes so romantic poem as I really love reading them and the way you write it , an entire picture was painted in front of my eyes..You know someone can write so well about so complicated things like love when you yourself feel that..You must be in love with someone to write such beautiful poems..Anyway , I love your poems and I want to read and review each one of them..You are indeed a great writer....
Keep on writing...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank-you so much ❤
very nice piece very well drafted...keep it up

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

1 Year Ago

Thank you ❤
I like your poem but, end of the poem really touches my heart. Thanks and keep writing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Years Ago

Thank-you 💕
Always sad to watch someone leave. I liked your thoughts and the want to wave. Thank you Rashi for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Years Ago

Thank-you 💕
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome Rashi.
Feed back is you shouldn't wave during blustery gale.
Only wave back during the still.

Nice write. Keep writing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Years Ago

Yes. Thank-you ♥💕
"Fine homely arms"- wow
wonderfully expressed the emotions.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Years Ago

Thank-you ♥💕
Priyanshi

2 Years Ago

My pleasure dear:)
it's a really sweet to see everlasting belief in love through your words. Keep it up

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Years Ago

Thank-you ♥☯
man i got goosebumps for some reason.lol that means its an amazing poem. im speechless

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Years Ago

Hey..Thank-you ♥☯
Damion

2 Years Ago

no problem i still have no words
Damion

2 Years Ago

it was for me wasnt it..lol
really beautiful poem, particularly like the line "saying goodbye is so dense and cold"


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Years Ago

Thank-you ♥☯
its really deep! Well done, keep writing...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rashi Jain

2 Years Ago

Thank-you ♥☯

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Rashi Jain
Rashi Jain

New Delhi, India



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