Punching Clouds

Punching Clouds

A Poem by duff
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He’s a son without dimension

A battered hate churning new

Purple fisted ruin and tension

Here all of the songs are blue    

The ascension full of attention

His emotionally fenced in truth

Another beating and detention

Apprehension pushed him too

Evil has zero comprehension


 

© 2021 duff


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'Here all of the songs are blue'

Woah, this is amazing. You had to have so much inspiration to write this one. It's so creative, and honestly? Really epic. This is amazing, and each wording you used is on point and perfect.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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duff

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much Colacat. Grateful.

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