Hurt

Hurt

A Poem by wordman


 



Life is tough,

love even tougher.

we walk our own paths,

the road always splits.

 

three's a crossroads,

on every path,

sometimes we stumble,

sometimes we fall.

 

sometimes we get lost.

in our way.

hoping to find ,

the right path ,one day.

 

i smell your perfume,

when i close my eyes,

and i feel your tears,

from my eyes...

 

© 2019 wordman


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"I feel your tears from my eyes." A beautiful line Ron! ~Sharon

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you my friend
a lovely poem of unrequited/lost love.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the visit lyn
Very beautiful poem. It is conspicuous reality of true love... But we cannot understand why it happened in true love. I love the lines of the poem, "sometimes we get lost.

in our way.

hoping to find ,

the right path ,one day."

Thanks for sharing such realistic poem, wordman :-)

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for reading
yes. .it's true love hurts especially if you are separated from that
special love in one's life.

nicely penned.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the visit
Yes, we hurt at one or some points or another. It's hard and sorrowful on the heart when something reminds us of them.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the visit
BlackRose

1 Month Ago

You're welcome. 🙂
A deeply moving truth.
We all hurt.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

sometimes,thank you
This is sadly true! Love is so tough sometimes. I felt the part where you wrote about smelling her perfume bc when you love someone and you smell something or someone who reminds you of the one you love, it drives you absolutely batty!

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the visit tina
Tina

1 Month Ago

You're welcome :) Thank you for the beautiful work!
 wordman

1 Month Ago

just an amateur
Love can be tough, life can be tougher. Sad but true. This all comes through beautifully in your poem. It is a sad and lonely place when you reach the crossroads.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Marie-Louise.

1 Month Ago

It comes from in your head and in your heart. Perhaps this “stuff” is a new language you are jus.. read more
 wordman

1 Month Ago

maybe it is,looks like your catching on pretty good
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Beautiful.

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Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
I've been thinking a lot about love and life and I agree. They're really tough. Beautiful poem

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you for the visit,,happy thanksgiving

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Added on September 12, 2019
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wordman

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just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living, i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares i .. more..

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