If I Were A Carpenter

If I Were A Carpenter

A Poem by wordman


 



Life without you,

i wouldn`t understand if,

you wasn`t my lady,

and i wasn't your man.

 

my life wouldn't be the same,

without you,

but the world,

wouldn't either

 

you take my breath away,

you sooth my soul,

when we`re apart

my heart is cold.

 

one day,

i will build a cabin,

in the sky

where eagles soar

and we never die.


My lips are sweet,

my love is true,

And i give it all,

all to you...

 

© 2019 wordman


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So romantic as
as always my gentle
kind friend such a
beautiful expression
of true love.


one day,

i will build a cabin,

in the sky

where eagles soar

and we never die.



My lips are sweet,

my love is true,

And i give it all,

all to you...



Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

3 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

3 Months Ago

You're welcome I
hope you're doing well 👍😄
 wordman

3 Months Ago

i am,thank you



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Another beautiful "be still my beating heart" write Ron! I love it. ~Sharon

Posted 1 Week Ago


 wordman

1 Week Ago

thank you sharon
Awww i love this.
Filled with emotion... with love.
A romantic write.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you melinda,,happy new year
Beautiful love this merry Xmas word man

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

merry christmas to you julie
good stuff - so touching. now that's true, deep, devoted love - without having to go to home depot! ... :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you pete,i see enough of home depot already
A fine tribute to a loved one, and Elton John’s song. This poem has the same passion without the piano.

I’ve never been an Elton John fan, but I have much more respect for him after seeing the movie Rocket Man. He is not only a performer, he’s artist and poet. And, this song is the ideal accompaniment to your poem. Nice work, sir.

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you mr ay,i like a few songs here and there from most artist,i guess if i said i was a fan it .. read more
You were my first visitor when I joined Writers Cafe. I looked at this poem and did not really understand it. It was a song. Right! But two weeks of drinking in so much wine for the soul I see it for what it is. It IS poetry. It is a a love song. It is heartfelt and romantic. If everyone had a touch of this in their lives, what a wonderful world this would be. Thank you Ron for being my first friend.

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you for the friendship and comment
now you can come to my poetis side and try it out
If you were a Carpenter and could fly like an Eagle, you could build a Cabin Nest for two up and away in the blue sky on a Cliff where wishes come true. Lovely poetry. Truly, Pat

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you pat
Simple romance that is so powerful with feelings and emotions. You sing its melodies and swing to its echoes. Marvelous you...

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you sami
Sami Khalil

2 Months Ago

You are welcome Wordman.
nice poem good job keep up the good work

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you for reading jennifer
jennifer little

2 Months Ago

ur welcome
I am always touched by the beauty, simplicity and sincerity in your expression.

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you divia

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