MattWheatus

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Guildford, Surrey, United Kingdom
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About Me

British Boy, 28 years old. I'm on the corporate ladder by day, looking for a creative outlet (and constructive feedback) by night! Depending on my mood my words tend to swing from uplifting to depressing. Suits my lifestyle though. I love to burn the candle at both ends, and would describe myself as upbeat, funny (with a dark sense of humour) dotted with a healthy dose of melancholy when I so choose. I am really into Florence & The Machine at the moment (great band) and enjoy an eclectic mix of indie, pop and anything else.


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Ian

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Ha Ha the best Damn English Poet Matt Wheatus

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks for doing the reviews I sent you:).

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Congratulations on getting your Top Reviewer Badge! You do a great job of reviewing and really deserve it!

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks for the review :D

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Im sending out read requests. If you get one for one you've already reviewed, please ignore. Thank you.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


thank you!

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Thanks! Really appreciate the review too. Likewise; your work was some of the first stuff I read on the site (I only joined a few days ago) and I just read your piece on time running out which is cool, clever way of making it feel quicker as it goes along (which proves the point). Send review requests my way as you add new work
Ian

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Posted 7 Years Ago


You got some nice stuff that im reading

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Can't wait! Really enjoyed chapter 5. It's a great story you are building! Just a few minor points:

Wiping tears to replace whipping tears
Everyone to replace every one
Huh?” He asked surprised - would the character be more composed? Is Ash aloof or down to earth?
I'll just to replace ill just
home next week to replace hoe next week
rubbed to replace rued
company's to replace companies

"I just remembered something I needed to do. It was very nice meeting you." If Ash is aloof and mysterious, should it be something like "I have just remembered a prior engagement, accept my apologies but I'd better be going. It's been a pleasure"

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Posted 7 Years Ago


ill have chapter 6 up asap <3